Reviews for Eigth Wonders of the World |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, could all be lies. Even so, Jack would tell you it's the story that counts; and as stories go, it was a fine one. my favourite part - jack would approve ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() aye, a very fine story it is. |
![]() ![]() ![]() “Objectors will be shot.” ...Is a fantastic line. Your Jack and Elizabeth remind me of Bonnie and Clyde, or F. Scott and Zelda, or some other freewheeling self-starring set of stars. Lovely. Well written. |
![]() ![]() I loved it! I think it's one of the only fics I've read that captures Jack's exuberence. I loved his proposal - I can just imagine him doing it that way - not asking exactly, but just making a statement and passing out! :) It was a perfect blend of happy memories, chilling encounters and a touch of sadness: Elizabeth remembering the miscarriage was very touching - as was the understated description of Jacks reaction to it. It's a shame because I would have liked to read your description of Jack as a father. All in all - pure contentment described in beautifully understated, simple prose. Thanks for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() 'objectors will be shot' that was a brilliant line! awesome! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh, i love jack/elizabeth! that was a wonderful story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The end...my God, the end was brilliant! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm not really a fan of Pirates fanfic, but this has converted me. A mix of sweetness and sadness and amazing language, a story that definitely deserves a fav. But really, it's going to be your fault I'm addicted to JackElizabeth pairings! XDXD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the ending darling, it's a lovely story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not sure I have anything coherent to add here. You made them human, and more than human. Great work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Jack, who claimed in moments of extreme inebriation to have risen from the sea like Venus, only “better armed”." What a great line. Also... " “I do indeed.” said Jack. He turned to the small audience. “Objectors will be shot.” " Also, the Governor's initially reluctant appearance at the wedding. Dancing on the table, indeed! Hereswith sent me here. Your fic is [insert effusive superlative of your choice here]. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a fine story too. Funny and sad in parts, and always gorgeously written. Any idea how much I have to read to find a writer like you? Me neither, but it's a lot. Am adding you to my alerts. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was completely and utterly gorgeous! The best I've ever read for this pairing. Fantastic work! I enjoyed this very much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh dear... Very, very beautiful... I've said it before and I'll say it again: haunting. And poignant. And poetic. Thanks! :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow! |