Reviews for A PLace of His Own
ShinaT chapter 1 . 5/21/2004
I hate to say it, but this is really rather unreadable. Who can tell if it's a good story if you've got it clumped up in five or six large paragraphs with multiple people speaking per paragraph?
Melody Triton chapter 1 . 1/19/2004
SOunds like these two k ow each other very well. Nicely done. BTW - thanx for the review of my story. You're the first. Take Care -Melody