Reviews for Time is Running Out
azbis chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
Mesmerising
storylistener chapter 1 . 10/18/2006
This was wonderful, yet sad. Am I correct in assuming that Dawnrunner is dreaming all the time now, and doesn't even realize it? Anyway, wonderful story and Good Job!
PrettyKittyOreo chapter 1 . 3/23/2004
Whoa. Cool AND freaky. I like :)
Gloria-who-is-to-lazy-to-login chapter 1 . 12/9/2003
Wow. Any chance a Mindhealer might be able to help?
Stee chapter 1 . 12/8/2003
*cheers* I get it! As always, you did a find job 'Cat.
Fireblade K'Chona chapter 1 . 12/7/2003
*applauds* I likey!
Ghrathryn chapter 1 . 12/7/2003
Hmm... I think I get some of it.
She is a Tale'edras (Shin'a'in spelling I think) caught in the magical storm, created by an accident, and got her mind blasted out of "reality" over a year ago, now she runs through her dream world as a shape-shifter, taking whatever form she chooses.
You think that's confusing lass, you ought to try some of Harry Turtledove's work, hells bells! He has a dozen or more viewpoint charas and jumps around every few paragraphs, leaving you wondering what the hell is going on.
As for re-writing, don't bother, unless you intend to turn this into a full length story, could be interesting to find out what happened to Dawnrunner, and if she eventually comes out of the dream she's trapped in, or if she wants to for that matter.
Thanks for the reviews lass.
Darkfyre
Book Angel chapter 1 . 12/6/2003
ahh... i liked it i think do you think you could re write it or write an explanation.