Reviews for Pool
Sharpsnout chapter 1 . 5/5/2006
Ok this was way too short, you really could've taken this idea somewhere it's a really good idea that needed more elaboration...

But I do like the last was perfect... Heimdall dumping a bucket of water over his head that is very amusing...

Maybe you could take this and write more on it, it would be entertaining, maybe write Loki's reaction to Heimdall's little prank on the trickster god himself...


MiKKa-CHaN chapter 1 . 4/7/2005
funny but a bit short
firedraygon chapter 1 . 5/17/2004
Ehehehe, fire. XP Poor Loki. Getting wet isn't fun.
Please write more soon!
Anonymous chapter 1 . 1/18/2004
That was sweet. Definitely amusing, I can just imagine the whole thing. Heh, heh, Poor Loki-kun.
Write more, okay?
thedaidoujicat chapter 1 . 12/31/2003
it was funny but a bit too short o.o
AmerReject chapter 1 . 12/31/2003
r u updateing cuz next time WRITE MORE PLZ _
MistyEyes chapter 1 . 12/9/2003
Poor Loki! Good job, this was exceptional. I find drabbles quite hard. o.O
yuugata no baka chapter 1 . 12/8/2003
Heehee . . . go Heimdall-kun! That was very much fun. You are very talented for writing something so fun in 100 words! - -
Akari-chan chapter 1 . 12/8/2003
Funny, but small T.T
FaNgIrL chapter 1 . 12/7/2003
*giggles* i can just imagine his reaction