Reviews for The Past Returns
HOWLMOONLIGHT13 chapter 11 . 7/28
I hate bao I can tell he is going to be a manipulated that s what I see him as. He is stupid and he knew all about Shang but never told Mulan. I HATE HIM I HOPE HE GETS HIS HEART TORN APART!

sorry I can get a bit protective over the characters in books even though they are characters. Great story though love it

-HOWLMOONLIGHT13
HOWLMOONLIGHT13 chapter 9 . 7/28
This better end with Mulan and Shang getting back together. I will be very upset if it dosn't
LemonPJOFan chapter 3 . 7/12/2018
Bao, Zao, Yao IT ALL RHYMES
good job
Felicity chapter 25 . 6/15/2016
I want them to have kids, but I'm glad she's Shang
Jane Doe chapter 3 . 12/31/2014
you have some grammar mistakes but the meaning of the text is AMAZING! VERY CREATIVE
Guest chapter 10 . 8/11/2013
Nooooo khan! D,:
Guest chapter 6 . 8/11/2013
Love this story :)
Artemis's Bow chapter 25 . 7/26/2013
Hey! Great work! Why don't you declare it as completed?
GoodNaughtyGirl chapter 25 . 5/19/2013
Awesome!
Guest chapter 6 . 4/5/2012
איזה סדיסט! שמי שכתב את הפנפיק הזה לא ייעלב אבל הוא מעביר מסר שאומר שאישה אינה יכולה לחיות ואינה בטוחה ללא גבר ובייחוד ללא אהבתה הראשונה. כמאמר השיר "חגיגה":

רק האחד יקשיב לך הוא המיועד. רק האחד יבין אותך הוא שלך לעד! הוא יקח אותך ותסעו מכאן אל העיר הגדולה אל החופה אל הגאולה".

ואגב גם דפי צדקה כשאיימה על דפני שללא הנסיך יהיו שתיהן אבודות ועזובות, איש לא ירצה בהן ולא יאהב אותן, הן יבלו את חייהן עצובות ובודדות ובסופו של דבר ימותו לגמרי לבדן.
mm chapter 10 . 6/17/2010
oh please i can't stand this!
Patty chapter 25 . 3/10/2010
dude i jst read this for the...lets see...1...2...3...MILLIONTH TIME...but not until now did i realise it was so...INSPIRING...!u shud keep writing THIS STORY 3 PLZ it wud do me and all ur other readers a favor...3
PaTTy chapter 25 . 8/13/2009
ok i kno im like...o.d late bt i want u kno tht ive read this story about 6 ties alredy nd i luv it!bt wat hppnd 2 Bao?i rlly want 2 kno, plz tell me u still write!
leah chapter 25 . 7/4/2009
good story wonder what happened to boa poor dude
xxxDestinyxxxLove chapter 1 . 3/21/2009
This story actually made me cry ! Ok ... I didn't cry but I came close to it XD You must have spent a lot of effort and time on this . And let me tell you something , all that effort was TOTALLY WORTH IT .
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