Reviews for Beast Wars In Short
Lin16 chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
Yeah, that's exactly what that first episode was like. In fact, I'm almost positive you didn't write this but dug up the screenplay and posted it here :p Its just too spot on
chaitea16 chapter 1 . 1/8/2010
That, while hysterical, was also the best explanation of beast wars ever. Nice to know I'm not the only one that thought Rhinox was the only sensible, competent one around.

If I get into any more specifics this review might get as long as the story itself. So I'll back up now and just say I adore your scene of humor.
Espree chapter 1 . 10/16/2009
OMG, I'm laughing so hard I'm crying. It's been a LONG time since a story's been able to get me to laugh like that. Awesome job! *GRIN* (Sorry I'm too lazy to sign in now.)

Anonymous chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
I laughed myself silly over this. I will never see Beast Wars the same again. I always found the first episodes irritating at best, but now... I'm laughing through them.
Silver Wizardess chapter 1 . 1/6/2009
Oh man, that was HILARIOUS! XD
CandyCoupe chapter 1 . 12/11/2008
Things that made me laugh hard:

"Waspinator... SMASH!"

"Shaddup, ya Starscream reject."

"Oh, yeah? I've got a fan!"

"...revealing a huge PILE OF ENERGON ROCK CANDY. Megatron DROOLS."

:'D You are awesome.
SyntheticEuph0ria chapter 1 . 5/2/2008
Optimus Primal: "Maximal explorers versus Predacon criminals, and all we get in our defense is Cheetor’s kittenish cuteness? We’re SO going to get our skidplates handed to us."

Best. Line. EVER.


Laughed myself silly reading this.

My parents thought I broke...
gatogirl1 chapter 1 . 3/10/2008

[falls over ded of lafter]

_ Oh wow, this was just too much! "Rattrap UNLOCKS the PET DOOR", "Waspinator and Cheetor commence demonstrating their INABILITY to HIT the BROAD SIDE OF A BARN", and "bad Predacons can’t win against the good Maximals because in real life good always triumphs against superior firepower because…" Oh man, I didn't think I'd make it past this point because I was laughing too much. _ Yay. Just total Yay. Especially the sheer amount of missed shots everyone takes. Wonder where they got all the extra ammo...Yay; we love Beast Wars, but it's still muy messed up _
Peacewish chapter 1 . 8/28/2007
Crack-up worthy! Just don't let anybody report you to the cossacks for having a fanfic in script format.
Amber Tiger chapter 1 . 12/4/2004
Oh my gosh, I'm in stitches! Please write more chapters, you have some really good jibes in here.
The Feesh chapter 1 . 5/13/2004
Christ. I actually cried it was so funny. That was fantastic, and one heck of a read, Lady D!
*Snickers at the powerwalking Predacons*
Taijiya-san chapter 1 . 4/1/2004
That was too great for words. XD Seriously, the story had me cracking up the entire time. Fantastic job!
Kairos Lokorr chapter 1 . 3/16/2004
(laughs evilly) ah BW in shortness...(looks at Megs) So feeling schitsy today?
Megs: No, Why should we? yes...
I'd say thats a big yes... Fun way of doing the first two ep's, funny...Dinobot's actually the most sensible this time...:p
Readasaur chapter 1 . 12/26/2003
*Still catching his breath after laughing so hard*
Oh my god...
I haven't laughed that hard in weeks!
The bit with the Predicon ship was kinda stale, but everything else!
Lady D. is a flipping genius!
The story was funny, but the caps made it hilarious!
Whew! This is one of those "must sees"...
I gotta find someone else to read this...
Flyby Stardancer chapter 1 . 12/8/2003
Yay! Something new from you! (does my happy dance) And it is FUNNY as well! (grins) WRITE MORE!
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