|Reviews for The Academy|
| Kitten60 chapter 43 . 12/19/2013
I wanted to let you know that I truly enjoyed this story very much. The story had an unusual plot and was interesting and very we'll done. Thank tour for completing it. Deb
| mycreativeoutlet chapter 7 . 9/2/2013
since remus is a werewolf, he wouldn't be able to touch a silver locket.
| Grey chapter 43 . 6/13/2013
Bloody awesome story. Read it start to finish. Well done.
| sneaky lunitic spy chapter 43 . 4/14/2013
I love this story and i feel a sequel would ruin the happy ending, some stories just need to have the unanswered questions.
| lilmisadiva chapter 39 . 12/22/2012
i love snape
| lilmisadiva chapter 38 . 12/22/2012
his british friends seem to fake for me flip a coin to choose their loyalty
| suala chapter 43 . 4/24/2012
You killed the story. I dont like the end. :-(
What I do not like is that the final battle took about what - 3 or 4 chapters? And The rescue action for Cali...I didnt count to be precise, but it seems to me that you rushed it too much in the end. It feels like you were bored to the end or distracted, whatever, and you had to end it quickly.
I liked the ritual, but I miss some explanation. Some description - what needed to be done, why they had to touch each other. Then, I would appreciate detailed description of the death of the Dark Lord, it is just so incomplete.
I am disappointed, after all this reading I expected something more in the last chapter.
| suala chapter 42 . 4/24/2012
I dont like the point it is heading to. It looks like in the last chapter Harry will figure out how Voldemort can be killed and he will do it. Seriously?
...well, I keep my criticism just for me until I finish reading the last chap.
| suala chapter 37 . 4/23/2012
How and When did Dumbledore appear at the final scene? It is confusing.
And maybe it could serve well if you could put a line or two between the revelation of Harrys bet and "two days after scene". ;-)
| suala chapter 36 . 4/23/2012
Ha, ha! Funne one! Oh, boys!
| suala chapter 35 . 4/23/2012
...And what about Dumbledore? Does he do nothing to find Cali?
(I know, Im digging too much, just cant help it)
| suala chapter 34 . 4/23/2012
Sorry, I havent been reviewing for so long. I read via mobile phone and the web wouldnt let me post a review.
Last 3 or 4 chapters seem a bit too stretched - full of words, poor of action.
How come Harry is so calm while Cali is being tortured? Shouldnt he react more desperately? A month to brew the potion and Harry is consented? I think a real Harry would have come up with something to rescue her, much earlier...
Maybe he would try to find her via their connection after all. I dont know, its just my opinion. Like this something just doesnt feel right for me.
| suala chapter 29 . 4/22/2012
I found the emotional change of Harry rather too quick. I get that he is agonized by the thought of Calis absence, but I would think him try to do something about that before just "realizing/knowing" shes dead.
...And where did Mishel go? "..two months have passed..." Did Harry eventually rescue him or did he not? ;-)
Im done for today (its nearly midnight). Thanks for sharing this story! Great job!
| suala chapter 28 . 4/22/2012
So, I have known for long now that Harry is in his 6th. But, now Im wondering if you have any sequel to this, because, this is F****** brilliant! :D I am definitely not looking forward to the end of the story...
| suala chapter 26 . 4/22/2012
Oh, nice! One new character to the story? Looks like Harry got himself a new friend, really. I soo want Harry could keep it!