|Reviews for Unbidden Desires|
| The King in White chapter 24 . 4/12
| CF-RB-GW-LC chapter 24 . 5/29/2016
| Guest chapter 9 . 12/11/2014
Lol. Did you take Mr Benette, Mr Collins and Mr Bingley from Pride and Prejudice? They are mentioned in the note at the begining of the chapter. Nicely done.
| enchantedstarlight chapter 6 . 7/1/2012
You said that this is your first fanfic? Well, kudos. You've got above average talent, m'dear! This story is charming so far. I love the way that you've portrayed our couple's little adventure. The way they went searching for the mirror is beautifully written - not that it's anything earth shattering, but it's so honest in its simplicity. I was drawn into their search, making it interesting and fun and with that bit of a mystery. The story and the plot flow very naturally. I also love how you've gotten their actions very well-matched for their age. Loving it so far.
| digitalwitch18 chapter 24 . 12/17/2010
I just finished reading your wonderful story. I have to say it's one of the best fanfics I have ever read! I love the little touches you added to it, naming each chapter after a song title. ( You have good taste in music.) Also love the things you did with Mrs. Norris, and Filch, as well as Moaning Myrtle. I actually came to tears reading her going on. It was wonderfully done!
| agoldenthrone chapter 12 . 10/28/2010
Well that's better. :D
Although, this is reminding me of Juliet now - it's like the sleeping potion or whatever she took.
| agoldenthrone chapter 10 . 10/28/2010
NO! NO NO NO NO NO!
Blaise can't die! D:
It's far too much like Romeo killing himself for my liking.
| Keladrion chapter 23 . 3/27/2010
Awesomeness! is this finished?
| TotallyBlondified chapter 23 . 12/12/2009
yeah nz is a beautiful place- i should know i live there
| Redbookbluebook chapter 17 . 11/28/2009
The thing with Sophia came as a complete surprise to me, but I think you did it well. I like that there was actually clues behind it and it wasn't just a random happenstance.
| Redbookbluebook chapter 4 . 11/22/2009
Aw, Ginny brought him food, that makes me happy. Michael Grant seems..interesting. Bet he's all evil deatheatery or something. Anyhow good stuff.
| Redbookbluebook chapter 3 . 11/21/2009
Well, since you did reference little shop of horrors, I guess I have to review... This story is incredibly funny. Despite the warning I did not see the D/G coming. I think it was too soon, but it does give them both something to think about which was probably more the point. Draco's thoughts make me laugh; he's so awesome and sad all at once.
| KrnYong chapter 3 . 7/30/2009
'Father would surely find some way to leave Azkaban, just so he could come and kill me.'
lol i can just imagine that happening
| air chapter 9 . 7/7/2009
ok...pretty good chapter here except for one problem...
Fred retorted, “Actually, Miss Granger, for once - you’re wrong.” Then he shouted, “Call Rita Skeeter! Exclusive: Hermione Granger answers question incorrectly! All of Gryffindor in shock! See the photos!” She gave him a good-natured smirk.
didnt you mean to say "he" instead of "she"?
| CaliforniaCougar chapter 24 . 2/10/2009
Hahahahahahaha that last part had me in tears I was laughing so hard!
This is, by FAR, the best Harry Potter fanfiction I have ever had the pleasure of reading, and the only one that had plot twists I actually DIDN'T see coming.
You have created a masterpiece!