|Reviews for Are You Living in the Real World?|
| Katsumerioko chapter 1 . 6/9/2005
That was great _
You write so well
| Hahn chapter 2 . 12/17/2003
Very good. Much better once the text-block-ness-ality (TM) of it was fixed. Anyway, please continue it.
| Hahn chapter 1 . 12/11/2003
Pretty good. Text blocky, though. As a general rule, start a new paragraphs whever someone says something. It makes the story much easier to read. Please fix the blocks, then continue.
| AnimeAngel chapter 1 . 12/10/2003
I thought it was good