Reviews for Harry Potter and The Golden Spear
Nifty Niffler chapter 12 . 8/9/2015
Normally, shaking one's head denotes a negative. When giving an affirmative answer, one will normally nod their head.
Nifty Niffler chapter 10 . 8/9/2015
You write a letter, not right a letter.

And it's stared, not starred.
Nifty Niffler chapter 8 . 8/9/2015
Just for your information:

Hermione talking: I didn't think Snape excepted... The word should be accepted.

After Harry whispers in Ginny's ear, he looks back at here... "here" should be her.

You need a beta. Still a decent story though.
Nifty Niffler chapter 7 . 8/9/2015
Harry can't ascend the stairs to the common room from his dorm. The word you're looking for is descend. Several other grammatical errors here too.
Alisha chapter 32 . 6/22/2015
It's Been A Decade I Assume It's Abandoned LOL. Too Bad It's A Really Good Au
lovemya2000 chapter 13 . 6/17/2015
Yayy Lupin
nayin17 chapter 4 . 12/27/2014
Oh well, I guess you've made a stupid Harry
nayin17 chapter 3 . 12/27/2014
Hope Harry is right
nayin17 chapter 1 . 12/27/2014
Interesting chapter
yugiohyaoiloverandsonicfangirl chapter 1 . 9/23/2011
great. and just a small note, Hedwig's a SHE. just a tiny note, but other than that great
RebeccaRoy chapter 7 . 12/15/2010
Nice warning from the sorting hat.
RebeccaRoy chapter 5 . 12/15/2010
Oh my, great birthday and what is up with the spear?
RebeccaRoy chapter 4 . 12/15/2010
Wow, good thing Dumbledore came back when he did, else Harry would have walked into another trap!
RebeccaRoy chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
Great start this!
David Fishwick chapter 32 . 12/7/2009
Awesome and please update soon thanks.
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