|Reviews for Disconnected|
| jankmusic chapter 1 . 7/31/2005
I'm up against some really good competition, even though we write totally different things. I enjoy your writing, and I hope you update soon.
Have a Nice Day!
| Digital Buddha chapter 1 . 3/5/2004
Very good. Where is chapter 2 ?
| LizKitten8 chapter 1 . 12/17/2003
Hi 's Me here.I really do like it.I remember to tell me whats going to happen before it does!And Another thing,good descriptive words nice ending,I haven't seen the Matrix, cause I told you I don't Like I do like this.(Your going to tell me what happening in the Matrix!Lol!) O.o
| Almostdefunct chapter 1 . 12/14/2003
Hm. It's definitely intriguing.
I think if you're going for the cliffie effect, the first ending works better, but the second is nicer length-wise. So either works.
I'll look for updates.
| Digital Buddha chapter 1 . 12/14/2003
This could turn very interesting.
| AgentofDeception chapter 1 . 12/12/2003
Well, that was interesting. The setup was well written and had good suspense. All in all, nice job and I'll be waiting for your update!