Reviews for TheFirst
kenneth.williams.56884761 chapter 1 . 4/5/2013
Wow
Lady Saffron chapter 1 . 1/4/2004
hey, that was great! your a really good writer keep it up!
Lady Saffron
Krechkny chapter 1 . 1/2/2004
Yes... sweet. Maybe a bit more 'elven atmosphere' would be nice... And just one thing: one does NOT say 'thank you' after sex. Thats just so - desperate. :-P
Orli's babe chapter 1 . 12/12/2003
I do like this story very much. Keep it up!