Reviews for Unwanted or Improper
solluxaradia99 chapter 20 . 7/23/2015
This is an amazing story. You should totally continue.
Goddess Alexandria chapter 6 . 8/29/2013
Your story is a little confusing one moment you have Ron saying Draco and Hermione are dating then you have Draco calling her a mudblood. You also have Hermione hating Harry, so why would she worry about him and Severus being locked in a room together?
Goddess Alexandria chapter 3 . 8/29/2013
Drunk Severus is adorable! Poor Harry and Severus, Hermione has to get over it quick.
AshleyAnnBaird12 chapter 20 . 7/30/2013
are you going to update...just curious
dem bones chapter 20 . 10/26/2012
This was better than I expected. I love moralstreak! Snape because he just looks the type to be so innocent. Spy! Lucius was a good touch and I have to stay your story isn't so cliche that I would stop reading it.I'd really love to see an update of this fic.

Though I'm slightly worried about what consummating the bond through Snape's head means for their relationship. There is probably so much sexual tension between Snape and Harry since the bond has possibly been established. I really hate the Dumbledore in this fic. He has to convince himself that Snape and Harry aren't just tools in his stupid war. Why justify it? Either Dumbledore is trying to convince himself what he's doing is right or he's just a twisted old man who wants to end this war through any possible means.

I'm a bit confused though, in earlier chapters wasn't Draco dating Ginny? Did they break up or something?

From the reviews I thought this would end with some severly angsty cliffhanger but really it's just a confused Harry who thinks his heart has been torn to pieces. Despite the fact this is incomplete the last chapter is written in such a way that I don't want to wring your neck for not updating in over 5 years and believe me I really thought it was going to end with Snape dealing the tough break on Harry. Believe me that would have killed me and made me come back from the dead with the desire to murder you.

Only one story had done that for me and I was very displeased when the last update was I believe in 04 or 09, let this be a lesson that suspense kills every tiny bit of a reader's sanity.
Lumcer chapter 20 . 7/22/2012
Ugh I hate when the good ones arent finished or left in such a place... Maybe I'll get lucky and you'll finish it at some point! If you do please let me know!

musme chapter 16 . 8/16/2011
i like it
dragondolphin1990 chapter 20 . 12/6/2010
It's been two years...

I should know better than read incomplete stories. I always get so sad that I don't get to know how it turns out. This one's really good, though, so I couldn't help myself.
wilkinsonREDS chapter 20 . 7/1/2010
OMFG pleeease update. this si fucking amazing :) i REEEALY want the lovey dovey snape and harry back :P pwease :D


wilkinsonREDS chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
WOW! :p
Jynx merriwinkle chapter 20 . 3/7/2010
please please please write more. love this story
TheNotedMusician chapter 20 . 2/3/2010
aww..poor harry! This story is really good, though! PLEASE update soon!

peruvianprincess chapter 20 . 12/5/2009
Well, I see it's been a year since you updated, so I'm not holding my breath for more, but I'd love to see you finish this story. It's nice to see the slow progression of the main relationship instead of a sudden, unsubstantiated, realization of feelings out of nowhere. You're doing a fine job with this and I hope you get inspired to finish it. Thanks.
jaywolfe chapter 20 . 9/21/2009
Please update son!
LittleMrsAdams chapter 20 . 9/7/2009
good story :) why is snape avoiding harry? nevermind, i think that i know why. i like this story. it needs to be updated! please? pretty please? ill give you a chocolate coverd severus if you update *dangles said object just out of authors reach and grins in mock innocence*
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