Reviews for Starting Out On A Journey
dcp1992 chapter 19 . 3/15/2013
Great story! That fight between Gohan and Videl was unexpected. I would react like that too, except I would be walking out for fresh air to relax to talk not have Videl leave. I would come back that night, but it would be a while, if I though she was cheating on me while I was gone on business trip especially if I saw (thought I saw) her making out with another man. Anyway great story.
asd668 chapter 4 . 1/23/2013
asd668 chapter 3 . 1/23/2013
ArE YYOu in ah urry TyPinG?!
asd668 chapter 2 . 1/23/2013
i love the story and my goal is to review every chapter!
asd668 chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
wow a great start to a story!
PePpErMiNt101 chapter 19 . 4/28/2009


Zukara chapter 19 . 3/9/2008
I just got done with the whole thing from the first chapter of walk me home to the Epilogue of starting out on a journey and i absolutely loved it. I maybe a guy but i know what a good story is and this was one. Fantastic... Kudos...
marielly chapter 12 . 5/23/2006
aw thats so sweet!
marielly chapter 11 . 5/23/2006
OMG whats going on? The suspence is killing me! You should write more chapters like these! I love them! Off to read the next chapter!
tori31 chapter 19 . 7/29/2005
Hey, I loved this story so much. I hope you keep writing, especially about Gohan and Videl! I also read Walk Me Home and i thought that was great too! Never stop writing! love tori
RyukoGirl chapter 19 . 6/29/2005
That was truly great! I liked it a lot, especially since I waist most of my time in the day reading fanfiction. It really helped my time go by and I hope you do more stories and post them on You are a great author, and most likely always will be.

Ja ne,

gohangirl7711 chapter 19 . 10/10/2004
I grew out of Sailor Moon a long time ago... and i'm younger than you. Meh... whatever.

Nice chapter, it took a while to read through it all (story) but it was well worth it. You have to write more chaps of You'll Be In My Heart. Or i'll... kick you continuosly in the stomach. Oh yeah... that should vent my undieing hate towards the world and everything on it... should.

kk later

Gargoyal chapter 19 . 10/9/2004
Un fortenetly i didnt hear of FFN early enough to read your story chapter by chapter. but if i had i would have been R&Ring every chapter and every time as one of the first in each chapter. I belive you have e verry good mind for writeing fiction stories. i think that you should go into writeing as a job. I belive you will do fine if you do. but if you have other plans i can understand. Good fic, and goodluck in the future. weather it be for good or for bad, i belive you can do whatever you set your mind to. as you have proven it by keeping with this fic for so long. anyways good luck, good fic, and hope to read your other stories.


Frying Pan of DOOM chapter 19 . 10/1/2004
that was kool

i got a little confused when u started the folash back thinys. u could have made that a little more clearer

I wonder what the next story holds for V and G and P.

hope to c that up when its ready and i'll be more then happy to help in any way i can.

OH and gresat advertising at the end! lol

u do a lot of work too.

love ya
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