|Reviews for His Majesty's Secret Service|
| Resident Evil Lionhart chapter 1 . 10/25/2012
Wow. I never payed attention to how old this has to be, until I realized that you made a Black who wasn't Sirius a Gryffandor! They had all previously been Slytherin or even Ravenclaw, so I know this has to be old. But that's okay, that's what I went to the back of the list for. Just...Seems like so far Severus isn't the second main character...You could have put OC for it, unless they didn't have that back then? I don't know, I don't think I was on here back then. Could and would you tell me, please? I am curious.
I feel so sorry for Ryan, though, having to befriend Malfoy while he's still such a prat. As the characters put it, lol.
Thanks for the story so far!
| Sugar Quill5302 chapter 13 . 7/15/2012
This was an awesome story
| Eregnar chapter 2 . 4/5/2011
Sadly, I am a new Harry Potter reader, and have only made it through book three, so I should probably wait to finish reading this...
| beccithenerd chapter 13 . 6/17/2010
Great Fic! Not usually a fan of cross-species ones, but I have to say, even the back story had me hooked! And when Ryan mentioned starting a family, and reminding Hermione about Ron, I was cooing so much!
Keep writing! And thanks for the read :)
| WhoivanWeepingAngel90 chapter 2 . 11/2/2009
| the black leopard chapter 13 . 11/14/2008
Wow, it has been awhile since I have read a story this well written. Your characters are all entirely believable, and your plot line is unique, probable, and captivating. I love the fact that though this story does not take place during Dumbledore's years at Hogwarts, it reflects back upon them in an easy to understand way. Wonderful wonderful job.
| Tulkawen chapter 13 . 1/15/2008
| nhr chapter 13 . 12/12/2007
woow..you made me want to meet ryan...i just simply hands down loved this story...
| Mousker chapter 13 . 9/15/2005
Excellent story. I thank you for the good read.
| ShadowCub chapter 13 . 8/10/2005
Years late with this review but I see Hermonines nose is bigger than Snapes.
| I'm-a-loser-and-proud-of-it chapter 11 . 8/9/2005
awsome story plz write mre
| AJ Mercedes chapter 13 . 10/1/2004
I read your story in one sitting after being refered to it by an article at Fanfiction 101. I LOVED it - especially the line about Goyle, Sr. accusing Ryan of corrupting Gregory and Ryan's response.
| wendelintheweird chapter 1 . 4/11/2004
*GOING DOWN ON MY KNEES TO THANK GOD I HAVE ACCESS TO THIS MANIFESTATION OF YOUR BRILLIANCE*
Favourite scenes: Hermione with Ryan - I can just *see* her crush on him (right now, I have one too), and him being so dashing and cheeky and gorgeous about it.. oh!
Scary Parts: In a weird way, Goyle-with-Ryan scenes. I was scared for Ryan, I kept thinking Goyle was going to do something to him. Love what you did with ol' Greg, tho.
Parts I'm not nuts about:
- McGonagall - didn't really go anywhere and I was fairly freaked out by her animosity.
- The Event, and Ginny. I can see why it had to be there, of course, absolutely necessary for Happenings in the story... but it would have been fun if all this stuff also played a part in the end - though I do appreciate the common thread of blood and blood purity that you weaved in so beautifully.
Ultimate Moment: The administration of Veritaserum, and Ryan promising Heddy it was going to be OK for her and her kind. *HUGE APPLAUSE*
Coolest line: "Cygnus? ... But.. you're dead!"
| Face of Poe chapter 13 . 9/3/2003
Hey, you probably think I'm really weird reviewing this story nearly three years after completion, but what the heck...it's actually a pretty funny thing...
A few years back (before I'd heard of , I didnt start going to this site until last summer) I was always surfing HP websites for fanfic. Well one day I found this story I really liked but it was only 4 chapters of it and it wasn't complete. Well I probably haven't been at that site in a couple years now. So about three days ago I was on trying to find a good story and this story popped into my head from no where. Unfortunately I couldn't remember the name though. So I went into 'find' and jotted a few words down that I thought might get me something along the lines of this story. Nope! So I tried it again. And WHAT WOULD YOU KNOW? OUT OF THE THOUSANDS OF HP STORIES ON THIS SITE I HAPPENED TO FIND A STORY WHOSE TITLE I COULDN'T EVEN REMEMBER? WHAT ARE THE CHANCES? I figured there was no more o the story anyway!
Anyway, since then I managed to finish your story...GREAT! It's definitely going in my fav list!
I really like the originality of this story. I find I often don't like stories that center around a made-up character but this one is great. It kept me anxious for the chance to finish, I'll tell you that much! Excellent! Bloody Brilliant!
| Chiquita chapter 4 . 7/28/2003
"Care for a brandy?"
We've seen the old dude offer sweets and tea, but never booze. Delightful. Perfectly delightful.