Reviews for Little Breezes
Smoltenica chapter 2 . 6/4/2005
Keep going! This is really great. Miri's right- you DO have a talent. I love the way how you change from dialogue to third person to a zoom out looking in on them and from their minds... I love that style of writing, it's always appealed to me.

Keep it up!
ruby chapter 2 . 3/4/2004
this is such a touching story! update soon.
Miri chapter 1 . 12/26/2003
i love this! it's really sweet and intriguing. i can't believe i've never read your fanfic before, somehow or other. you have a real talent. :)
meredithblithe chapter 1 . 12/24/2003
What a wonderful and sweet ficlet! Ruby is absolutely correct - you do have a gift for dialogue. I hope you'll add to this story and show us how the relationship between John and Cecilia developed.
ruby chapter 1 . 12/15/2003
thankyouthankyouthankyou! as i told terreis, i am home with the flu and am loving reading these stories!
you have a real gift for dialogue. more action and more updates please!