Reviews for Forgiven
young kagome chapter 2 . 2/26/2015
Awe. I wish you'd finished the story. Oh well. It was nice.
SayonaraKuroi chapter 2 . 4/18/2014
HawaiianCaffeine chapter 2 . 11/26/2010
Oh, come on... this isn't an end to a story. This is like... the 2nd part to a three part series. Less than that... this is the 2nd part to a ONE or TWO paragraph less than a full story. All he needed to do was turn around, go back, kiss her, ask for marraige, then live happily ever after! Hmm...i shall either be looking or waiting for the sequel... :)
Blueberry Babe chapter 2 . 11/3/2009
m ya could use some more of an ending ..but then.. you could have left us to make our own endings.. lol hope you can put an epolog on it.
Lady Fluffy chapter 2 . 8/1/2009
I found this to be a very good story, it was well written and you can see time and thought was put in to it. although it is a somewhat sad story, i would like to read more of it to see where you would take the story, i can imagin where i would but i would like to see more of your writting
valiantblueknight chapter 2 . 11/28/2008
if he's craving anything its love right? because he didn't have it for his whole life and she was the only one to give it to him. you always want something as powerful as love so that should be it right? just a thought.(this is the longest review I've written that wasn't filled with 10 exclamation points.)
w0ah chapter 2 . 8/18/2008
oh god, I love this two-shot. you were right, I do want it to be continued ) I just loved the plot in this and everything that happened. A good fan-fiction is one that leaves you thinking about it once your done, and i must say, this is one of those. once again great job! )
Kibi.s2 chapter 2 . 6/26/2008
I really like the story!
Gothic Lust chapter 2 . 6/19/2008
i love this idea so do continue!
Lucille08 chapter 2 . 6/19/2008

Update! pls...

i love the story! it's really original
Uncoloured186 chapter 2 . 6/2/2008

don't know what should i write...

Uncoloured186 chapter 1 . 6/2/2008
nice work!

i like it :)

my name is paper YAH chapter 2 . 4/28/2008 sad. please. do something that will make this story not sad anymore. cries silently
won't be the Victim chapter 2 . 8/3/2007
Sorry but this ending sucked major! It's gets your hopes up then crushes them in the mud. well what ever, good plot-
ShadeSpirit chapter 2 . 12/13/2006
Wow, this was sad. I really like it and I'd dearly love it if you added one more chapter to it. I just...wanna know what happens. It seems unfinished and leaves me feeling rather dissatisfied. But it is truly a wonderful work.
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