This story gets into my favs and wins a review, just because of the blooper reel. Pretty fantasmic. Awwwww matey, you done good!

I am not much of a reviewer but, this one is far by the best PotC stories I have read, and top in my favs, loved it, and I abslolutely love Gwen, wish she was an actual character, your characterization of of Jack is pretty good, thank you for an amazing story.(reading it's 3 part now)

So, this is like the twelfth time I've read this, but it's the first time in about a year or so. I just wanted to tell you what an amazing writer you are. Seriously, this is one of the best stories I've ever read, and it's even better than a lot of the books that I've paid money to read. Thank you so much for writing this, and for allowing all of us to read it...for free. I can't say enough good things about it or recommend it enough to others. I honestly love it. Again, thank you so much. I enjoyed every minute of this.

Did you know the song's from Peter Pan the musical?

I loved, loved, LOVED this story. It was amazing! I really liked the part where they just let their love be unsaid on continue on with whatever they doing. Great Story, really enjoyed it. Sad it's over.

I really enjoyed this story. I liked the plot, the adventure, the emotions. It was a very nicely written story and if you didn't know better it could even appear to have been written in that time era. I really liked Gwen and I felt as if she were a real person. I especially liked the bloopers at the end. They made me smile. Very nice. Good work. :)

I just wanted to say that I absolutely adored your story :) Although at some moments I may have questioned Gwen's thinking process, she was a brilliant amd strong character, which isn't easy (i know). Thank you for sharing!

I think I peed a little when I read the blooper reel xD

That was quite unexpected. I am going to keep reading due to my keen interest in your intriguing plot and decent mechanics. Thanks for posting this! :)

Brilliant story! :)

Just wanted to let you know before you saw that someone favorited this and didn't review (I loathe it when people do that to me!) that I stumbled across this and plan on reading it but as it is so late and I have classes tomorrow, I haven't gotten around to it yet. So, I will leave a review soon! Can't wait to read. :)

This was a fantastically written story. I loved the plot, and how you managed all matter of genres into it-romance, adventure, suspense, comedy, and the like. I love your OC, too; unlike Gwen, most OCs are too ridiculously wimpy or otherwise too angsty. You seem to have found a pleasant middle ground, which was great.

A wonderful job all around- even down to the 'bloopers' at the end, which were hilarious. :)

-Katie

This is certainly one of the better PotC stories I've read on this site so well done! You made Gwen a very believable character, and Jack was pretty close to acurratley depicted, which I know can be difficult to do. Bravo!

Well, I just read your story and well...to give my honest opinion, I quite loved it. Language was pretty good, plot wasn't half bad, although you could have elaborated more on the curse of Jacobs...another thing, Gwen seemed to be a little lifeless, hollow. Perhaps if you could have given her more emotion, given a little more insight into her thought processes...Anyway, other than that, good job! Keep on with the good stuff me hearty!

Roanna

PS: I've emailed you for the two chappies to see how you do with the notorious Cap'n Sparrow! D Looking forward to the tidbits!

Brilliant! This was brilliant fun from beginning to end. A good, old-school potc romp. Written with rare humor and intelligence too. Thank you!