Reviews for Fallen |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great story, it finished pretty quickly but I loved it. Couldn't help but snicker at Lucius trying to manipulate Harry to get more Tom only for Harry and Tom to bond to one another. |
![]() ![]() Que mal que no pones lemon ...trate de entrar a la página que dijiste del cap 13 y no existe ... será que es por qué estamos en 2020? Me alegra que estés terminado el fic. No me gusta que no haya lemon Saludos desde junio 8 de 2020 México |
![]() ![]() ![]() fells a bit rushed compaired to start but none the less good story love snakes! |
![]() ![]() I love this story so much. The fact that you didn't get lost in details made the story even better. Thank you for the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The link you have said to go to doesn’t work. I loved the story but really disappointed that I can’t finish the story now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a good Read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just want to point out that squeaks is the sound a mouse makes or a door. The word you want is squick. I really like Harry and his relationship with Nagini and how Voldemort treats him. But for some reason I don't like the idea of Lucius intruding in their relationship. I feel like any HP/LM would be disingenuous on Lucius' part. I don't have the same dislike for Severus. Thanks for writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story thank you for writing it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this fic but I'm not about to go to another website to read all of the required chapters. |
![]() ![]() WTF... And Story destroyed already.. ah it sad how many destroy a good Story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story:) |
![]() ![]() Why is the year of the date always 2003? |
![]() ![]() ![]() so what if they don't review. as long as they read it. that's all that matters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it, great story! Shouldve had more snarry but this is good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting story so far. |