Reviews for Forgive Me, My Friend
forTheLoveOfHades chapter 19 . 1/3/2013
cool
Thorongil chapter 19 . 12/1/2010
OMG i read your fanfic a long time ago when it was only like 7 chapters and i loved it. And i found it again and i STILL love update soon. ive waited so long for some fics ive read to be updated. So PLEASE UPDATE!
nightcrawler chapter 7 . 12/3/2009
i...am...going...to...kill...YOU!...
CosmicEssence chapter 19 . 10/2/2009
Good dollop of angst and a real bout of stupidty by well a number of the characters. I mean what is with all the mock kidnappings? Legolas' trick i can handle...the twins yeah i can see that...even maybe right after Legolas but Gandalf? no way! and 3 in a row is a bit much. Some of your humor at the beginning i.e. that 'tickling him' thing was done in the wrong way. It was like you were trying to be dramatic and funny but actually was just trying to hard and it came across silly and not amusing. That lot up there HOWEVER are my only problems with this one...except the angst...love the angst and it really rolls ofthe page at times..which is great! (sorry if my writing is so out of sorts ive been typing all day nd now its speedy and probably barely making any sense huh?) :P

Now Laylen is sweet and i like your Colin character. I also enjoyed the bit where Legolas semi loses it and keeps whispering that he has to go back...that scene was brill. And the elves responses especially Elrond's was wicked. Liked your creative license bit...i mean whats the point in writing fantasy even other peoples' if u cant use your own initiative! So the trees help was another favourite of mine...especially how the tree went about conversing. REally really want to know what plan Aragorn has and i hope you udte...soon! U see look at that! I meant update!
iccle fairy chapter 19 . 9/30/2009
great chapter!
iccle fairy chapter 18 . 9/24/2009
great chapter!
Kaisaan Greenleaf chapter 18 . 9/23/2009
Hi! I've been following your story for some time, but have never reviewed...

I thought I would today! LOL

You have a great plot and I like your characters and the way you portray already established characters. Can't wait to read more!

Keep up the good work!

~ Kaisaan
ShadowMoonDancer chapter 17 . 9/23/2009
Interesting concept but it could be better gone into. Go into some details not just the grusome ones but more on the escape plan. I do thank you for stopping responding to reviewers on the story page.
livininadream chapter 17 . 9/22/2009
good job!
livininadream chapter 16 . 8/22/2009
Good job! An update! Gasp!
Arlya chapter 16 . 8/21/2009
well it has taken me some time to read all the way through but finally got up to date. its reali good (y) :D

I love it definately want to see moree. :)

update soon please. xx
iccle fairy chapter 16 . 8/21/2009
really good chapter! update soon!
WhiteGloves chapter 16 . 8/20/2009
lol! Nice chapter! Our ranger was cleaned out! XD

Update more! please!
Elenothar chapter 16 . 8/20/2009
I'm so sorry that I only found the story now! I really love it :)

PLease keep updating!
WhiteGloves chapter 15 . 7/12/2009
I really love this one... Please update it ok?

Thank you! _
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