|Reviews for More to Life|
| gaarapanda5 chapter 1 . 3/28/2008
great one shot!
| Uzamaki-Girl chapter 1 . 4/20/2006
So sweet! So sweet that I can feel my teeth rotting. Dammit! I KNEW I should have brought a toothbrush with me before I sat down to read!
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/22/2005
| mgnc chapter 1 . 8/8/2005
That was so dramatic yet so sweet! Great Job BUT...how come they didn't kiss? *Sigh* And, you didn't mention where Shippou was at the very moment...
Oh well, at least I got to read a very nice and fluffy one-shot...and also funny!
Lots of Betterlucks,
| DeluxxxxInu chapter 1 . 5/13/2005
Oh my gosh, you have no idea how awesome that was! I absolutely loved it! It was so amazing! It was all so cute and I could not stop smiling, except for at the sad parts where I was almost put to tears! It was so awesome!
| Inubuddy chapter 1 . 5/3/2005
CUTE! Nice job!
| WhiteTigerLilly chapter 1 . 3/30/2005
Aww! I liked this! It wasn't Made ooc! it was so like them! Youre good real good!
| Aliryn chapter 1 . 3/6/2005
Now if I could only convince my mother on that point... -_-
| LADY HIEI chapter 1 . 12/28/2004
MY QUESTION IS WERE WAS SHIPPO? OTHER THAN THAT GREAT STORY.
| Dark Lady 69 chapter 1 . 12/21/2004
AW THAT WAS...THAT WAS SO
SWEET I WAS CRYING AND IT WAS JUST SO SWEET
| appzoloot chapter 1 . 11/1/2004
Okay, I'm a bit embarassed but it kinda made me cry. Your writing is excellent. The details and use of words really do bring out a lot. When they met...I was like...OMG! This is getting me! That was awesome! And people here are right, it's nice to read a fic with the right spelling and great use of words. Mayan...I wanna know what else happened!
| FrameofMind chapter 1 . 10/8/2004
(*sigh*) love it...absolutely love it...
I can't even think of any criticisms, which - trust me - is high praise coming from me (*grin*).
P.S. Oh, I thought of one! 'Learnt' isn't a word - it's 'learned'.
| Azmidia chapter 1 . 10/6/2004
aw that was so sweet. I almost got a tear.
| Kainos Ktisis chapter 1 . 9/18/2004
Aww...that was so sweet. Go fluffiness all the way!
| baka deshi chapter 1 . 3/31/2004
Aw... *sniffles* Short, sweet, and to the point. Nicely done. Normally I'm not much for WAFF, but this one hit all the right spots :)