Reviews for Jak III: Secret Origins
jaqjaq123 chapter 7 . 3/29/2012
umm muse, i know this is a bit late, but hey, im only new to the FF world,

the balance means jak is now able to control when to he because super awesome dark eco jak

you would know that if you bothered to play the Jak 3 game
jaqjaq123 chapter 5 . 3/29/2012
i know there are already chapters ahead, and already published and all that, but im warning you JAK and KEIRA better end up together or I WILL KILL THAT GARETH GUY

other than that, i really like the story, how your expanding all the lives of the slightly less well known characters
D00rFr4m3 chapter 15 . 4/7/2011
SSSSWWWWEEEEEETTTTT! I looooooved it! I'm gonna read the sequel...tomorrow. I wanna go read a Halo fic so...Bye!
D00rFr4m3 chapter 11 . 4/7/2011
I SWEAR I will throw Torn into a puddle of Dark Eco if he tears Keira and jak apart. That means you'll have to write me into your story!*Evil Grin* So,d'you wanna get Torn to tear'em apart and end up having to write more? Or let'em stay together and safe yourself a whole new character to make? XD. Yes,I am extremely manipulative. XD.
D00rFr4m3 chapter 10 . 4/7/2011
YES! Sucka's I saw it comin'!
D00rFr4m3 chapter 7 . 4/7/2011
Imma say this real slow so your(No offence) completely phycotic mind can process it. Fucking-Awesome. Please excuse my French. XD
D00rFr4m3 chapter 6 . 4/7/2011
I think that Sig is Keira's dad and Kitina's lover(I'm sorry if I got her name wrong,I'm not good with names unless I have a face to put'em to...unless he character is awesome XD
D00rFr4m3 chapter 4 . 4/7/2011
The part in the AN at the end made me chuckle. The mailwoman,seriously? Are you a dog or something? Lol.
D00rFr4m3 chapter 1 . 4/7/2011
Confusing. As hell. Good. reguardless,still confusing as hell.
jessi chapter 15 . 9/18/2010
Excellent story! Can't wait to read to the sequel!
HopelessRomantic183 chapter 15 . 4/22/2010
This is such a great story! If not for classes and homework I would have read it straight through! The daxter turning back to human thing is a little weird, but I can deal with it. I can't wait to start reading the next story, I'm sure it will be just as good. if not better!
Desteroyer chapter 15 . 11/1/2009
OMG I read this story way LONG before I got an account here on FF!I fell in love with it and it's sequel, I've been seaching for it since! SO, aside from my random outburst, I love this story ! Its one of the best I've read on here! ANYWAY, I'll stop rambling! :) :p
razorstar chapter 15 . 11/4/2006
very good very good loved it. beatifully written love love stories
deactivated654 chapter 15 . 10/2/2006
I must say, I loved this story. It's great how you intertwine so many things into just one single story. It makes it so much better that way. You've done even more of that in your sequel, making it so complex but still easy to follow. Great story, and I look forward to reading more of your work
Darkening Light chapter 2 . 6/21/2006
Oh... nice. Bdw, your throwing stars are shuriken - Ask the ninja expert lol. Not an expert ' still 9th kyu in my training - no where near black belt '

Nice work anyway... now I'll continue reading your very interesting fic!
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