Reviews for Of Fish and Men
Hatty chapter 22 . 12/30/2014
Fantastic story I lived it so much! It took a decade to complete but it was well worth it! I lived this so much and it captured the characters so well, thank you very much this story has made my day - from a big nemo fan and a lover of fiction
Guest chapter 22 . 12/28/2014
I love this chapter but I think it needs a little bit more detail in it.

Try it something like this:

Marlin chuckled pulling Dory and Nemo into a group hug, the Tank Gang joined the group hug and giant smiles spread across all their faces. "Yeah but I'm back." His grip tighten around his loved ones, "Let's go home." And Marlin and everyone started singing.

Marlin: The sky above the sea is perfectly blue
The clouds are perfect too
And here I am with you
What could be more right?

Gill: A quest has come to an end
Deb: And homes around the reef
Nemo: And here you are daddy
what can be more right?

Everyone: Nothing can go wrong
If everything is right
And everything is right somehow
Nothing can go wrong
As long as everything is right
And everything is right, right now!

Nemo: Jellyfish are swimming around
Gill: We're on a familiar reef
And look at who is back
Marlin: What can be more right?

Everyone: Nothing can go wrong
If everything is right
And everything is right somehow
Nothing can go wrong
As long as everything is right
And everything is right!

Peach: Top to bottom!
Everyone: Everything is right!
Mr. Ray: Thank goodness Marlin is back!
Everyone: Everything is right!
Deb, Gurgle, and Bloat: Now that's what we call 'a happy ending'!
Everyone: Everything is right!
Nemo: Perfectly, wonderfully!
Squirt: And totally!
Crush: And rightfully!
Bubbles and Jacques: And beautifully!
Dory: And wonderfully!
Everyone: Right now!

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What a happy ending. :(

I really sure did enjoyed writing that. XD anyway, you see what getting at? About you adding a song version called "Everything Is Right"? XD If you could put a little more detail into the finale chapter, I'm sure your writing will be more wonderful to the readers. Trust me. :)
Princess Hephzi of Arendale chapter 22 . 4/21/2014
WOW! Such a wonderful fanfic! This is so good! WOW!
Princess Hephzi of Arendale chapter 13 . 4/21/2014
So she does it on purpose? Good theory!
Princess Hephzi of Arendale chapter 10 . 4/21/2014
Oooooooooooo! CAN'T WAIT FOR FINDING DORY!
Princess Hephzi of Arendale chapter 2 . 4/21/2014
GASP!
Hellbender290 chapter 22 . 1/20/2014
Best story ever
Teared up a bit when Dory kinda died
Butterfree chapter 6 . 1/2/2014
Phaha, Marlin's reaction at being flirted with was priceless.

Queenie Leung
mlpxncis chapter 2 . 11/7/2013
I like your threat :) mwoo Hahaha!
PandaMin chapter 22 . 7/11/2013
I love this fan fiction, no joke. It's really amazing. This certainly changed my life, thank you.
cw chapter 22 . 7/11/2013
rip dory :(
Celestial Rainstorm chapter 22 . 5/31/2013
CELL 95 Block A113

Ah ha, I see what'cha did there...
KeyToLove113 chapter 22 . 5/15/2013
Finally! the last chapter! It was so good! Yay!
jess chapter 21 . 4/7/2013
holy shit please update
PLEASE i've been following this story for so long
i gotta know how it ends!
JessieH08 chapter 21 . 1/21/2013
Please continue this! It's amazing! :)
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