Reviews for Kat's Story
Banana Belle chapter 3 . 1/2/2004
I'm glad to see a story form one of the other characters perspectives. I noticed there was not any other reviews, and it might be because your story is rated R. I normally forget to check the R stories unless there is a real reason to rate your story R, I suggest you change the rating. The format you are writing in is difficult to read. Try separating what each character is saying by double spacing. These are only suggestions to take into consideration. I hope to see another chapter up soon.