Reviews for Four's Company
Firekeeper727 chapter 8 . 5/1/2004
Okay... twelve then. It's a good story, and I'm glad that you didn't kill her off! They gotta get together... and yeah, I'm a fan of good endings... story book endings if you will. lol, but I understand if you are going to kill her off, it makes just as good as an ending, though not something that one is used to. ok, me going to continue reading now..
Firekeeper727 chapter 7 . 5/1/2004
Umm... let me guess. Legolas! Hehe, one can only hope. I'll be continuing now... I'm guessing that you are finished with this story... nine chapters now? I believe... I'll be continuing..
Firekeeper727 chapter 1 . 5/1/2004
Hey, I like your story so far. I'm behind, aye, but I'll continue reading and catch up! You don't really have too many spelling mistakes or grammar... at least not so many that are glaringly bad. I'm going to continue reading now..
Rayame325 chapter 11 . 4/14/2004
Hi,
The fluff! So cute I loved it! O, now what will happen?
Rayame325
Navaer Lalaith chapter 11 . 4/13/2004
Alright, my history is rusty. But, my Elvish is not. And I can tell you now, that the Grey Company "Elvish" Phrase book doesn't contain much Elvish, but plenty of made up stuff. Here's a REAL Elvish phrase book that does contain Elvish. (Delete the spaces in w w w) w w dreamingfifi/
Namárië an Lalaith
Faerlain chapter 11 . 4/13/2004
Yay, she's alive! *wipes all tears away and has cookie* M, yum.
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Simple.
She is such a cool character! And if she and Leggy do get married...
I'll cry again. I mean it, i will cry! And cookies won't stop the tears this time!
Great chapter, and update soon! _
Lainfaer
Emiliana Keladry chapter 11 . 4/13/2004
I'm happy. Lalaith's alive! Yea! I love this story. Thanks for the long chappie!
Anastasia Who chapter 11 . 4/13/2004
You didn't kill her! *dances around the room, cheering* I'm so happy you didn't kill her. This chapter was good. I'm glad that Legolas told Laliath that he loved her and she said the same. One comment though. Legolas, Aragorn, Gimli and even Gandalf did seem a bit out of character at a few places. Just the way their replies were written and things like that. It was good though. Please update soon. I am anxious to hear what you have in mind for Laliath next.
Rayame325 chapter 10 . 4/3/2004
Hi,
Thanks, for helping me. Very good and sad. I can't wait to read more! Good luck tonight, He's an ellegant squeaker! Lolz.
Rayame325
Faerlain chapter 10 . 4/1/2004
oh...
she died...
*bursts into tears*
YOU KILLED HER!
Is this the end?
Or wil there be more?
If there will be...
UPDATE SOON!
Yay... _
Lainfaer
Anastasia Who chapter 10 . 4/1/2004
*sniff* That was so sad. *sniff* I'm glad Legolas is okay and that Lalaith told him her feelings, even if it was too late. Did you have to go and kill her, though? Can't she still like maybe be alive? *sigh* Good chapter. PLease update soon.
information age chapter 1 . 4/1/2004
Your readers (I mean Namarie an Lalaith) are giving you bad advice. Lalaith was a human girl who lived during First Age, child of human parents Morwen and Hurin. Check Encyclopedia of Arda on the net, Namarie - Edain means Man, Elda means Elf.
As Lalaith had unhappy fate and died quite young, I doubt any elf would want to use same name for their daughter, but it is still possible.
Emiliana Keladry chapter 10 . 3/31/2004
Are you and Rayame fighting? Where's Lalaith again? I forgot. Anyway, good chappie. Keep it up.
Navaer Lalaith chapter 1 . 3/30/2004
Lalaith is a real Elf from Middle-earth. She was the daughter of Morwen and Húrin. She died in childhood. Since Elves don't name their children after other Elves, I suggest you find a name a little more fitting to the character. I'm willing and happy to help you! Check out my Bio or e-mail me.
Namárië an Lalaith
Faerlain chapter 9 . 3/23/2004
Really really good. I lvoe Lalaith being stubborn like it - its a good image to portray!
Please pleas please please please please please please please please please (You get the picture)please please please UPDATE SOON! _
Lainfaer
P.S. Sorry about the penny! _
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