Reviews for This Poor Youngling
Ne'ith5 chapter 5 . 2/13
What a lovely story! I enjoyed the use of Norse names and the imagination of the story, though I was surprised to see the story of King Herod from Jewish writings and the bible, though it was skillfully used. All of the disparate parts made a delightful whole. The end of your tale was my favorite where Legolas and the descendant of Swanhild meet. Bravo well done! I look foreword to reading any other stories you post.
Guest chapter 5 . 11/2/2014
Very good!
Starkid191 chapter 5 . 2/17/2013
Oh my god. Theoughout all that, I was literally just yelling 'LEGOLAS IS JESUS!' to no one in particular.

Loved it!
gginsc chapter 5 . 5/18/2011
Couldn't find a way to reply to "Person" who reviewed this story on 09/02/2010.

This story is based on the birth of Jesus Christ. Herod was the king at that time who tried to kill him by destroying all the babies in Bethlehem.

Moses was the babe in Egypt who was placed in the Nile river by his mother because paroah wanted to kill all male Jewish babies to ensure the Jews did not outbreed the Egyptians. He was rescued by either the daughter or sister of paroah and raised as an Egyptian prince.
Person chapter 2 . 9/2/2010
R U Jewish? No offense intended, but this story was surprisingly like Moses being found.
DecepticonDefenestrater chapter 5 . 7/27/2010
good story.
funkichooki chapter 5 . 10/9/2009
That was such a sweet tale. I loved it.
FireChildSlytherin5 chapter 5 . 4/9/2006
Good story.
christine chapter 5 . 3/14/2004
it was great! i loved it so much... thanks for your awesome work
lulu bell chapter 5 . 1/19/2004
loved the story! very good! it does seem like the first christmas. i reslly did enjoy reeading it!
lulu bell chapter 4 . 1/19/2004
so sad. gald he's found, but sad for the women.
lulu bell chapter 3 . 1/19/2004
weird. i know part of that song. i learned it as 'medevil christmas carol'.
it goes: on december 5 and 20. fum. fum. fum. on december 5 and 20. fum. fum. fum. on december five and 20, fum. fum. fum/ o sisters too, how may we do, for to preserve this day. bye bye lully lulla. bye bye lully lulla.
there is more, but i have forgotten it. great job!
lulu bell chapter 2 . 1/19/2004
was going to ask where u got the nems. but u said. great chapter! am loving it!
lulu bell chapter 1 . 1/19/2004
short. but sad. onto the next chapter.
I-like-chickens chapter 5 . 1/15/2004
Awesome ending to an awesome story.
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