Reviews for Dancing with the Devil
J.W.H. 10 chapter 19 . 4/9
Dude, it took you seven years to finish this? Whoa
silveamockingjay chapter 16 . 4/7
Well they already argued like they were married...
Silveamockingjay chapter 1 . 4/4
Though you keep little faith in your writing abilities; I have to congradulate you. It is not often that my mind is captivated in the first chapter. Your skills are nothing short of fantastic.
Ghostkid33 chapter 19 . 3/30
*gasp* AKU is the Forest King?! Holy crap!

Where are you? It's been six years since you updated this story. At first, I didn't want to read it because it was a yaoi fic (and I'm not a big fan of yaoi) but the storyline tempted me into giving it a chance. Imagine my surprise when I saw the yaoi implications were more subtle than I thought. You're keeping Jack and Aku perfectly in character with the relationship development-mostly by highlighting their thoughts and the descriptions of their actions using metaphors and similes that keep younger audiences in the dark about the present innuendos but are hintful enough to make older readers understand what is taking place. I like how Aku and Jack are both learning from each other as the story continues to expand and finding out the different sides to their characterizations as well as some of each other's secrets. The lust that's obviously taking hold, which seems to be forming more strongly on Jack's end than Aku-is what can be used to describe what's happening between them. Aku doesn't feel it as much since he's a heartless demonic embodiment of evil immune to human emotions and can use Jack's newfound lustful attraction toward him as a tool of manipulation to drive him further into darkness. I believe Aku foreshadowed this himself in chapter 17...

Anyway, I feel sorry for what both of them are going through. Gaia has turned them into her prey and setting them on a cat-and-mouse path to walk right into a trap that would lead to their elimination-Aku especially since she drained him of like ninety-nine percent of his power and inflicted him with a deadly illness that's slowly draining away his lifeforce so she can absorb him and take over the world in his place. Seriously, what kind of mother does that to her child? Then again, these are demons we're talking about so human morale doesn't exist.

And Dagaz...wow, he's definitely smarter than he lets on if he was able to figure out "Ojika" is a demon. Granted, he doesn't know said demon is Aku but still...I give him credit. I don't know whether to be angry with him or wanting to share his opinion about putting Aku out of his misery though. I sure hope you continue this at some point so we can see how this story of yours concludes. It would be bad to leave it unfinished like the show ended up being.
Chaoshift chapter 1 . 2/9
Poetic yet still carries tension. Defeat certainly came as a shock.
CobaltTheFox chapter 1 . 9/22/2015
Hey there.~

I know you must get tons of these, but I just gotta say man.. This is undeniably one of the best fanfictions I've ever read, and is without-a-doubt my favorite SJ fic.

This inspired me to write my own Aku/Jack fic, it was so good.

I hope one day you'll consider finishing this.
aziuka chapter 19 . 9/2/2015
Oh dear. I know that many readers have asked you to do this, but please, please, can you continue this story? It's THE best SJ fan fic I've ever read. Please. Pretty please. I'll bake you a cake. I'll make you the heir of my not-so-vast fortune. I'll raise your illegitimate children as my own. Just give it another chance.
corpseanonymous chapter 19 . 2/9/2015
I hope you plan on continuing this.
Guest chapter 19 . 1/1/2015
wat ._.
So it just ends like that?
Ok :P
Crazy Noob chapter 17 . 1/1/2015
Hey,its the same commenter who commented on that kissed scene!
But...O_O
Still reading this for the sole purpose of freaking myself out!
And its freaking me out pretty damn well!
Just picturing that whole scene, Jack holding Aku around the waist, their faces all close.
Crap I just shrieked.
Excellent Work
Guest chapter 16 . 1/1/2015
Oh My Tallest Red and Purple...
I can't believe it XD (I've been reading this as sort of a dare challenge for myself)
Sooooooooooo the kiss...was an accident? I love how subtly you went about it,
like 'Oh you know, inner character thoughts,inner character thoughts, and then this is happens.
And then they went about it like: Wait, what?
Freakin perfection!
Guest chapter 11 . 12/31/2014
lol I had a feeling Ojika meant deer...
Oh.
That could be taken in a weird,slashy direction. Get it? Deer,dear..
Ah,homophones.
taiyari chapter 19 . 9/19/2014
This is one of those fanfictions that gain a high place in my personal favorites. You are a very talented writer, and managed to create something beautiful and complex, subtle and powerful. You are very coherent with how both characters develop and your world building abilities are pretty good and deep. It is truly a shame this wonderful jewel is abandoned. I totally love it, thank you for it 3
emily chapter 1 . 9/15/2014
so far this is really good keep it up!
Maeve Moonstone chapter 6 . 9/13/2014
Well, since he's a shape shifter, I'd have to say that his physical form would be fairly liquid. So he could have a dick if he wanted a dick, and he could, in fact, have anything he wants. I believe that his clothing is made of flesh, so it is like he is covered in a way but it is still part of his body. So he's not naked, but he doesn't really have clothing in the traditional sense either.
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