|Reviews for Gone for Good|
| cadMonk3y chapter 1 . 3/31/2008
sounds pretty chaotic.. past-tense / present-tense / future-tense
the protagenist needs some nu music
| 4th6thDoc chapter 1 . 5/23/2005
Just one major point: You seem to be mixing tenses. Some are past tense, "I went over to my bag..." and some are present tense "So I haul out my CD's..." I personally prefer past tense to present. I normally don't read present-tense stories, but the whole concept intrigued me. I could see this happening. Gavin did get pretty obnoxious when drunk.
I'm anxiously waiting for more, of course. I wanna see how Jake reacts when he sees her!
Oh, liked the bit about the roaches. Are you from the south too? That's one thing I did NOT miss when I moved away from the MS gulf coast!
| AlanisJunkie chapter 1 . 12/30/2003
This is a pretty good fic. Well written with good ideas. Keep it comin'.