Reviews for Only Gift
gabelou1991 chapter 1 . 6/25/2015
Guest chapter 1 . 6/29/2014
Haha really funny!
Rebmul chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
id love to have seen her reaction and chichis to him asking her to marry her
taking it easy chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
Wow, what a fantastic ending, gotta love Goten D

And yes, Vegeta could so be the Grinch. Haha! Nice one.
PrincessLazyPants chapter 1 . 1/24/2012
Omgosh, Goten's last line made me literally laugh out loud! Cutest fic ever
Sharpclaws chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
I loved how you ended this! I'm putting this on my favorites.
Datu824 chapter 1 . 11/21/2010
Good story, very cute and nice.
Amy chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
I love the ending! Great story!
Major Session chapter 1 . 11/25/2009
Aww, Goten got his cookie taken. Give back his cookie!
Itachi's apprentice chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
“But I got you one step closer to grandchildren!”

This part made LoL.

“Well,” he said while taking out the velvet box from earlier. He got on one knee and opened the box. “The only gift I wanted was you.”

This was so cute.
staryllia chapter 1 . 10/30/2009
omg! such a great story, I love it!
TANATOSU chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
oh that was funny i like the way you ended it with Goten's comment this is getting on the favorite list.
Jrik23 chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
How Cute. Makes sense that he would be upset if he planed on proposing on Christmas and he couldn't. I liked the story continue making them please.
Gabby-Chwan chapter 1 . 4/6/2008
lol, the ending was the best!

KageOkami-Kogo chapter 1 . 3/5/2008
That was the cutest dark christmas dbz fic ever! Ahh! I love Goten and Trunks! They are SO funny and cute... I have a bit of a CC for you, nothing much I just wanted to point something out to ya...

[“Absolutely freezing and boring with you,” she sighed and then sneezed. “I miss you so much.”]

- Boring with you? Do you mean boring withOUT you? It'd seem kinda mean to say someone with boring unless you didn't like them...

[“Oi Bulma-San, my mom wanted me to bring the Christmas cookies for tomorrow,” Gohan called out while brining the tray to Bulma.]

-I just wanted to point out here that you missed the G in bringing that's all :D

[“Ok, ja guys,” he said while putting down the phone.]

-What does "ja" mean in this sentence? Just curious...

[“I listen but have a short term memory span,” Goten said. “Well that’s what Gohan says anyways.”

“And he is so true,” Trunks muttered to himself.]

-I think what you meant there was "And he is so right," :D he is so true would be like saying the word HE is true... you know?

-Also, I think you left out "problem" in the first sentence... every human being has a short term memory...

“Sure you are,” Goten teased. “That’s why you looked so happy in the window a minute ago.”

-How did she fit in the window? :D

Those little things just caught my attention and were nagging at me, don't let it bother you though! It was a great story, very cute, please write more!
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