Reviews for Transition Anchor
Yoholic chapter 4 . 12/15/2011
Love the au method of making the jinchuuriki beural but more satisfying
Yoholic chapter 5 . 11/13/2011
Another excellent chapter please do finish it up
Yoholic chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
A truly good story hope you complete it,
verinere chapter 5 . 3/8/2011
Y'know, all i can say is... such a crying _shame_ that this is unfinished. Such an utter waste.

Sorry, but i'm just too frustrated and, dammit, utterly curious - "what next what next %$&$ %% %* it's not abandoned is it oh no it is aargh aargh aargh" was my thought process, i think - to review properly.

Still, your fic. And it is awesome. Even if it'll never be resolved. There's war, and Naruto, and how he's dealing, realistically. Utterly exceptional writing. Plot, characters, all top notch. Excellent buildup. A real pleasure to read.

Of course, just at the bit where i'm on the edge of my seat, it cuts off.

You're cruel, you know?

I'll reiterate, though, because even unfinished, this is one of the best fics i've found - this is just wonderfully written.

P.S. The last review went through oddly, i think - just resubmitting.
verinere chapter 6 . 3/8/2011
Y'know, all i can say is... such a crying _shame_ that this is unfinished. Such an utter waste.

Sorry, but i'm just too frustrated and, dammit, utterly curious - "what next what next %$&$ %% %* it's not abandoned is it oh no it is aargh aargh aargh" was my thought process, i think - to review properly.

Still, your fic. And it is awesome. Even if it'll never be resolved. There's war, and Naruto, and how he's dealing, realisticallly. Utterly exceptional writing. Plot, characters, all top notch. Excellent buildup. A real pleasure to read.

Of course, just at the bit where i'm on the edge of my seat, it cuts off.

You're cruel, you know?

I'll reiterate, though, because even unfinished, this is one of the best fics i've found - this is just wonderfully written.
Queen Readalot chapter 6 . 1/4/2011
This is amazing, plot and writing-wise. I suppose the seven year gap means that you aren't continuing this? Shame. If you can, please go ahead in writing this! It has a lot of potential!

I absolutely love your characterization of naruto. Poor guy! So much has happened to him, and he remains strong.

Hoping you continue with this!

-readalot91214
anon chapter 5 . 6/7/2010
simply fabulous. I love your style. Not exactly stream of consciousness; just very experiential, very phenomenological. I can't quite describe what is so different about it, but it's very effective. I realize you've probably abandoned fanfic, but I hope you are writing furiously somewhere, because you are good. It always amazes me how many good writers write fanfics. That's why I read it (and I'm still kinda amazed that I read fanfic!). I'm fascinated by the character of naruto, and your portrayal of him is wonderful. Few people really explore his bratty side, and you havve done that in depth, with full compassion. It's not like you dwell on it; rather, your examination of it is a superb example of "show instead of tell" writing. Wish you'd do more naruto, but I can certainly understand if you've moved on. thanks!
Bloodgalore chapter 6 . 1/1/2010
That was funny. Told you I wasn't dying.

Ha ha.

Update please! It's been years!
Amrun chapter 6 . 7/21/2009
I love the stark reality of this fic, though it may never be updated. Even so, thanks for sharing what is here. It was a fun read, despite the gore.
Escpist chapter 1 . 3/19/2009
This is GREAT.

I just finished reading this piece in a rush on the eve of a big math exam. I can't help myself.

Hope you can pick up where you left now that you're back Chelsee.

*slap on the back and huge shove*

Keep it up!
Alasoi chapter 6 . 2/15/2009
Why wasn't this continued? It's great. Much better than the piles of garbage that constitutes 90% of the fanfiction out there. /:
AKung chapter 6 . 12/9/2008
Not to burst any bubbles or anything... but I went to your new website , and I don't see anything?

Btw, I appreciate the effort into keeping your stories alive. Haven't seen anything yet, but I hope to. Good luck and work hard. :)

-AKung

aeckung gmail

PS: And re-reading my old review, I can't believe I made spelling errors :(. How could I mix up allude and elude? One's literary, the other is more action-oriented. And that's just one. Sorry about that.
RakeeshJ4 chapter 6 . 9/22/2008
Ah! Of course this fic is abandoned after...*checks*...four and a half years, but I just wanted you to know if you even still get these, I can't remember a story I was more sad to see end. Excellent work, and thanks for sharing:)
Bucks chapter 1 . 6/15/2008
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Your story has made it in to the library of the forum. We are a site that critiques Naruto fanfiction. We intend to give honest critique and hope to help you get better at writing. We need a little more activity and hope to get the authors in that are already in the library to join the site and help other authors with their intel, hence get less crap or even avoid the crap that seems to litter nowadays and help improve you as a writer.
Animeaddict666 chapter 6 . 4/23/2008
You have delectably long chapters. I like your style and plot, however, I wish you had more dialog. Still, I'll hold my breath for the update! Cheers!
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