|Reviews for To End The Evil|
| Ares' Warrior Babe chapter 59 . 7/29/2004
You made me smile through this whole chapter. Especially when Jarod and Parker's romance came up. Damn I still can't stop smiling. I LOVE this chapter. Post more soon.
Damn I can't stop smiling! Oh well I'm smiling for Parker and Jarod!
| Brandy chapter 59 . 7/29/2004
Alright, I was one of those that was jumping up and down in my seat! LOL! Great chapter and I'm soo glad that they are getting further and Danny seems like he is going to be a great help. I loved it when MP came out with the dress on and J was pretty speechless. I also liked tha he told Paker why he introduced her as melina..that was a nice attention to detail, since calling her by her name is sacred to her. They finally got together! You are so evil just ending it there. I'm glad that they took that final step and you wrote ot soow well. Believe me I will always shower you with praise for your stories and I still think that you should write novels. I think that you could write an amazing pretender novel. This story is a prime example. Please update soon! Loving it!
| Joy chapter 59 . 7/29/2004
Well it is about time LOL. Now that we have taken care of that, it is time to kick some Centre But.
| mychakk chapter 59 . 7/29/2004
o! it's getting hot here! I think I have to open the window... *grin*
I love this story, really.
hm, I wonder if this story is going to end soon. I hope it's not.
| morgan chapter 59 . 7/29/2004
wow this this great chapter
| msand chapter 59 . 7/29/2004
Just found your story and read it through in two days. I'm looking forward to more.
| agent1332 chapter 58 . 7/27/2004
I like that you had them wait. keep up the good work.
| Brandy chapter 58 . 7/27/2004
You are evil, but not for letting them go further. They have taken their time to get this far in their relationship and going further is something for them that is not taken lightly. I think that you are doing a lovely job and I know that they will get there and it will be worth the wait. )This type of romance always is... Love the moments between MP&J, they are soo cute. Boy aren;t lyle and Raines in for a surprise, can't wait for that! Also loved that broots is still intimidated by parker! Classic, she plays that up to the hilt. Loved the moment between Ethan and Parker as well. They have a very sweet relationship and ideal bond if you were to look deeper. Can't say enough great things! My review would be even longer. Please update soon!
| colorfree chapter 58 . 7/27/2004
So many things I could say, but I'll just tell you this one "tail of kisses"? LOL I'm sure it's just a typo and you meant "trail of kisses" so I'll let it go. :o) Having fun, keep up the good work.
| gemini006007 chapter 58 . 7/26/2004
Good, finally Angelo has started the Virus. Now Lyle and Mr. Raines are in for quite a surprise. As for Jarod and Miss Parker taking their time with their relationship, I think you are capturing their emotions very well. Anxiously awaiting your next update.
| morgan chapter 58 . 7/26/2004
HI ICD REALY REALY GOOD CHAPTER I JUST
END TO READ BEFOUR 2 DAY CHAPTER 57 AND NOW
THIS CHAPTER I LIKE IT , KEEP UP WITH THE
AND YES YOU ARE NOT EVIL AT ALL ;)
IM WAITING TO THE NEXT CHAPTER
UP DATE SOON :)
| mfkngst chapter 58 . 7/26/2004
I’m glad they are waiting. I mean after all these years, what a few more weeks, right? Plus it gives me more to look forward to. Please write more soon.
| Joy chapter 58 . 7/26/2004
Well since you explained it like that, I won't be mad at you for stopping them right there. All in all, you are doing a great job.
| Brandy chapter 57 . 7/25/2004
Hey, sorry that my review wasn't sooner. Loved this chapter even more, if that is possible! Great chapter! I love the sweet brother/sister moments between J and Em. I like that she just wanted him to explain his relationship with Parker, syd, etc. so she could see how important they are too him. I love it when he describes his feelings toward parker and how she was his light in the centre. They got everything ready for the centre take down! Bring it on! Please update soon! Can't wait for more and I'm glad that everyone is behind J and Parker now. More more more!
| colorfree chapter 57 . 7/23/2004
Okay, not a "huff" in sight. However, you can't use silently the way that you do. A person can't say something silently, silence implies no sound. They can say things quietly. Don't make me tell you AGAIN! LOL