Reviews for Forgiveness
Writer65 chapter 1 . 1/2/2014
Hey great fic.
When I was watching the movie i was wondering what would Koda thinking, and you really portray Kodas perspective.
Your fic is an excelent fic.
Carlisle Fan 22 chapter 1 . 10/6/2013
I loved your story. I was wondering what was going through Koda's mind. It was makes me cry to see that scene in the movie when Kenai tells Koda he killed his mom no matter how many times I see it. But I loved the fact that Kenai decide to remain a bear to take care of Koda. He may have lost one brother, but he gain another who loves him just the same. Great job on this story. Keep up the great job writing. :D
purplefern chapter 1 . 6/30/2013
Kinda big words for Koda, but I loved it. Adorable brother fluffy stuff, yay!
Anitoon3 chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
Hi there!

this is cool!

Aw, that must've been hard for Koda to hear from Kenai...

yay! he forgave him!

And Denahi understood them! cool!

cool ending! .

Thanks for making this!

~ Anitoon3
rne123 chapter 1 . 11/16/2010
Nice storie , you think you can make more ? It would be nice!
WeBuiltThePyramids chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
Archery Shootingstar Bright chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
Sweet story! Well written in espressing Koda's fear, confusion, and need to forgive Kenai. I kinda think that some adjectives don't exactly sound like what Koda would say but nonetheless it makes the feelings more vivid. Good job _
Lady Rini chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
Aww how cute! it's also very well written too.
ChetCheerio chapter 1 . 2/27/2009
Gijinka Renamon chapter 1 . 8/4/2007
Not bad, not bad at all. I like it.
Lunatique chapter 1 . 10/1/2004
Very nice story! I liked the emotional content and how you depicted Koda's range of emotions. Heartwarming and sweet. As another reviewer said, the mature tone of the story could be attributed to an older Koda looking back. He could even be imagined as telling this story to other bears, like Denahi did! :)
neosun7 chapter 1 . 4/5/2004
That's a beautiful story!
Epesi Cheetah chapter 1 . 2/13/2004
Nice story. . It was pretty well written, though I do have a bit of a complaint about the narrative. It was told first-person from Koda's perspective, and it explained his thoughts and emotions perfectly. My complaint is that Koda sounded a bit too mature, though it could easily have been him looking back on it when he was older, I suppose, so my complaint isn't really all that significant. It might have worked better if it was third-person but still from Koda's perspective, but maybe that's just me. Regardless, I enjoyed it. :) It was nice, and bittersweet.
Chibi Tatiana chapter 1 . 1/26/2004
Sad... So sad...
Dude in the Moon chapter 1 . 1/14/2004
Great story, great plot, great everything! You explained everything in great detail, didn't miss a beat. PLEASE WRITE MORE CHAPTERS!
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