Again, another story I read some time before I realized you were writing several of my favorite stories

This was beautiful, I loved reading it. I can see that Oishi would find Eiji different from Tezuka (well duh) but the way you phrased it let the characters' feelings come to life. I really envy that quality in your writing- the fact that your characters seem to leap off the page.

I loved this, please write the other two installments!

cute. there was a part with fuji-"he's pretty nasty when you start listening closely to him" that i thought was a little overboard...but then his faith in eiji at the end was better. fuji's just a crazy character, i guess!

i like how you write fuji. i've read him as evil, and as really nice, but here you manage to balance them pretty well. oishi's well written too- loved the line about how 'fascinating' eiji is to him. :D

Interesting. I like seeing how they all met, and this idea has a lot of merit. Beyond that, it's well written and an enjoyable read. Good Job.

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This was extremely well written. The plot that was laid out was very believable. I loved the grasp you have on the characters, expounding on them without making them OOC. You've touched upon some themes here that I really haven't seen, such as the friendship between Fuji, Tezuka and Oishi. It was very well done and you've conveyed a lot in these two chapters. We don't see very many stories like this now-a-days and I'm glad that I happened to find it. Thank you for this wonderful story!

Aw, Oishi. :3

There aren't enough (well-written) Oishi-Tezuka friendship fics. _

Wow! That was truly amazing, I loved it!

It's not everyday you get one with the third-years in first-year.

Keep writing!

Aw, thank you for writing this. Fics exploring into the past of our favorite Seigaku Regulars rare, much less one that focuses evenly on all the characters of Oishi, Eiji, Tezuka and Fuji. You even included Kawamura here. I awfully love how you focussed on Oishi - not many fics around the fandom center very much on him, or bother to characterize him as the person he really could have been as portrayed in your fic. Eiji is very, very Eiji in here, and so glompable, that he not only made Oishi laughed, he made ME laugh what with his brain and mouth moving at motorpower. Fuji's appearance in this fic was a surprise, and considering how much fic time was devoted to him, I can only glomp you all the more for conceiving such an interesting scenario between him and Tezuka. Fuji and Tezuka's rivalry had always been very interesting for him, and you explored their past and dynamics very well here, as well as delving into how the Golden Pair could have come about.

Loved this, and going onto my favorites certainly.

Good job on the characters and their skills! Much of it was funny, and I like the converstaion about old adn new friends. That is true. This is another possible way how part of the team could have been formed.

Really like where this is going. The characters are in depth and the story is very exciting to read. Keep up at it!

Good story.

i love kikumaru hes the coolest character

Aw...this is s cute and such a great read! I like they way you portray their various characters. I suppose my only gripe would be that it wasn't longer but you pulled it off excellently, so kudos to you!

That was such a nice fic _ I loved how in character they all were and despite there being deviations from the actual PoT story (hence AU, I know) it really didn't feel like it was an AU, just... almost like another perspective on how it all began. :)