cool! i love it! D

Wow. That's quite sentimental. I hope I got that word right. I mean, does it fit here? 9_9 Not sure.
Anyways, there are some small errors somewhere in the story, but not too noticeable. I think this story is great. Especially told from Oishi's POV. Very nicely written. Quite understandable. Some small errors here and there.
Still... I feel sad that this had ended too quickly ;_;.
Nice work!

What a lovely story! Oishi's POV is beautifully done - and I think I like your version of the Golden Pair meet-up better than canon. :)

I really like your intepretation...This was a really nice fic.

What can I say? Fabulous job! This is a story whereby the reality really exceeds the expectation. You consistently achieve that for your stories, and I must say us readers are a lucky bunch!
I am glad that there was so much focus on Tezuka and Fuji! *sighs happily* But what I really like is how you developed Oishi and Eiji's relationship. Eiji is so perceptive here! Only by learning to relinquish, does Oishi gain something in return.
Looking forward to more of your wonderful creations!

this is really good! I esp. liked the fuji vs tezuka match... it would be just like fuji to that sort of thing. but higuma otoshi isn't the weakest! itz so cool! P actually all of his triple counters are cool. and you can only do a proper tsubame gaeshi against a top spin.. and hakugei only works in the wind ) *sigh* oh well, the oishi/eiji parts were good too.. and i think i'll agree with oishi - takasan seems slightly insane to me S oh well, itz so sad that your fic is so short. (*jumps up and down in joy* finally a pot fic with no grammar or spelling mistakes!) but i like your ending. I like endings like that - with only one short sentence.. very meaningful too

i'm completely in love with this fic!
the way you write the characters are so real!
i so wish that the "end" you put doesn't really mean "the end" 'coz i'd love to read more _

There is a little error about the technicalities of tennis which I think I should point out. When Kawamura served to Eiji, his first went in and Eiji didn't get it, so it would be 15-love, that's all correct. But the second serve which didn't go in would have been a 'fault' instead of 15-15, only if the next serve doesn't land in either will the score be 15 all.
Other than that, excellent chapter once again I'm looking forward to Part 3.

"Tezuka... Oishi thought, feeling like Tezuka had suddenly started running far ahead of him and there was no way he would ever reach him."
*squeaks* OOh, Oishi! ;_; I found that moving, his need to be in Tezuka's life as someone who matters. I loved the insecurity there - it seemed like an Oishi/Tezuka moment of real depth. Keep going please! _

m... I like this story. _ I just started watching TeniPuri, and O/K is quickly becoming my favorite pairing. This is one of the better-written stories I've seen, and hope you continue it! _ I usually prefer reading a lot of fanfiction before I start writing about the anime, but there just aren't that many good TeniPuri ones out there. / Keep up the good work; it's inspiring!

I like this! It's a cute way for them to meet...

Definitely an AU since the Golden Pair didn't start on the most amiable of terms in the manga. LOL. Really good ...although this feels less like a Oishi/Kikumaru fic, and more like a preamble to a story about Tezuka and Fuji. However, that's just my perception, and I am known for been seriously misguided.
I am really enjoying your version of the Golden Pair's meeting. I think you have illustrated the 'mercurial' aspect of Eiji really well. *cough* But my favourite is still Fuji-sama. You just make him so appealing and intriguing in all your POT stories!
LOL. So here's my appeal for more Tezuka and Fuji action in later chapters! I shall be waiting patiently!

Wai! Cute and fun! I'm looking forward to the next chapter! *hearts*

I kind of like this way of how Oishi and Eiji met...it's just as plausible as the on in ch203. I think there were a few minor spelling errors in the chapter but great writing once again. I hope you write the other two because the ending just doesn't seem right...sort of like an invitation of a continuation of the fic.

That was a very heartwarming fic. Very lovely. :)