|Reviews for Only a Spectator|
| Ivy chapter 1 . 4/12/2013
Now This Was Great But Andromeda Black Married Ted Tonks and Had Nymphadora Tonks as her Daughter and Alice Prewett Married Frank Longbottom and Had Neville Longbottom!
| Mini Nicka chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
Sad but very good.
| Tia chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
This was amazing! It really brings out Snape's love... though it is rather hard to imagine. I like how it's written in Snape's perspective. I feel really sorry for him... the one person he's ever loved, taken away by the man he hated. He had an abusive childhood, too... so sad.:(
P.S. Severus Snape is my favorite charachter EVER!
| Logan Kilde chapter 1 . 10/17/2007
I absolutely LOVE this! I am obsessed with Sev and Lily also. I can't believe how perfect this is! I really think you got the perfect emotions into your passage. I have a Severus/Lily website also, and I looked up others on google and found yours. Can I PLEASE put this on my website? I will make sure it says it was written by you. Please email me at The website url is
| Lily Evans chapter 1 . 9/19/2007
that is so beautiful it show alot of emotion from snape
| Aurorablue chapter 1 . 8/3/2007
You sure predicted how Snape feels about Lily alright!
Oh, how sad and bittersweet...I liked this little ficlet.
Thanks for sharing.
| GenieBella chapter 1 . 7/26/2007
This is an amazing fan fiction and you are a skilled writer. Keep up the good work! ;)
| ZeherLily chapter 1 . 9/7/2006
One of my fav Lily and Snape facfictions ever. Please keep writing more S/L fanfics! I just love the way you write them :)
| RavenLady chapter 1 . 8/20/2005
Oh, this is flawless. I love the line about fairy tales. And Snape's comments on the decorations ("there is a higher power, but you cannot tell me He is a Gryffindor" and "snakes always get the bum rap") made me laugh. And then the rest made me want to cry.
| ThE fOrGoTtEn MaRaUdEr chapter 1 . 2/27/2005
As much much as I dislike Snape, I can't help but feel sorry for him in this fic. Good writing.
| NeoAthena chapter 1 . 6/22/2004
So sad. Yet so perfect. I hate and love stories like that. *falls into puddle of tears* One thing before I go off to cry more, try to be a bit more descriptive in some of the areas. Like the fairy tale part...*goes off to cry*
| Jo Ann Spencer chapter 1 . 6/15/2004
Wow. Great minds think alike, eh? We even have the same lil' snoozing dragon counters... O.O
Lovely piece of work, and "I Loved Her More" as well. :)
Jo Ann (LJ amberdiceless)
| a1s2d3f4 chapter 1 . 1/6/2004
you used such wonderful adjectives to make a great but tragic story *sniff sniff*
| Hated Angel chapter 1 . 1/5/2004
Poor Sevvy! I'm in tears. I love this kind of fic. Ahh...thank you for a woundeful tale.
| Danae chapter 1 . 1/4/2004
OMG! I just read this at fictionalley! and i have to say that this made me cry! Poor Sevy! *hugs him* So sad!