Reviews for The Dark One
Eternally Bored chapter 10 . 3/28/2009
I love this story so far! You really should continue it.
Eroket chapter 8 . 1/5/2005
Heh, battle's going quite well thus far. Keep it up
AnvilBlue chapter 8 . 5/17/2004
*hands alcohol and backs away slowly*
Nice chappie though, have a suicide squad even. That'll be interesting, 'specially with Bran in it. Nice job.
avlblu
AnvilBlue chapter 6 . 4/18/2004
They don't know he's deaf? Dang, that definitely something against them...
Heh, I definitely like the humor elements you keep putting in your chapters, adds the funny without taking away from the story. I'm still enjoying this, definitely shaping up to be ineteresting. Nice fic so far.
avlblu/zlost
ps:if I stop reviewing this it isn't because the story's gone south or anything like that, it'll be because I moved on, jus' sort of an fyi
ArwenGaladriel chapter 4 . 3/5/2004
Funny! And YOUR DESCRIPTION OF FOOD IS MAKING ME VERY VERY HUNGRY! T_T.
O vell. I still love this story. SO SORRY I haven't reviewed. Forgive me *sniff*
Galadriel
AnvilBlue chapter 5 . 2/26/2004
Oh...very, vey nice. Definitely a good element to introduce, I think I see where you could go with all of this...sorta force a change...
So their second in command is mute? Is he going to be using sign language, written or a drum or something to communicate? Definitely could be an interesting aspect (especially if you actually use it to build somethinglike I never did).
Awesome fic so far,
Acoustical Ferret/ZLost
clara200 chapter 5 . 2/26/2004
hmm the vermin seem cool. I like your comment at the end.
Vane2 chapter 5 . 2/26/2004
How can Whipslash tell everyone they're going to Redwall in the morning when he's mute? I don't really understand...
Wish it had more Bran, but I guess he'll be in the next chapter...
clara200 chapter 4 . 2/19/2004
hmm this could be intreasting.
AnvilBlue chapter 4 . 2/18/2004
This is definitely going to be getting interesting ain't it? Bran and Skipper are both good characters for this an' you've got a great story so far.
Veryu nice,
Acoustical Ferret/ZLost
AnimegirlHF chapter 4 . 2/16/2004
XD Poor Bran! He's really NOT enjoying this, is he? *Snicker* I hope he turns out to be a good guy though! It'd be kinda cool if he changed his mind because of their kindness and the way the dibbuns seem to love him. _ Can't wait for the next chapter! Ciao for now!
Arwen-Galadriel WAY too lazy to sign in chapter 3 . 1/14/2004
Hi ho! Great chapter. I love Abbess Linda!
I guess Bran didn't like Samara all that much, he didn't appear to be too upset at her demise. I find that sad... *sniff* T_T *sob*
Well, I still love the story, get updatin'!
Arwen-Galadriel
AnvilBlue chapter 3 . 1/5/2004
Very, very nicely done. I like the way you have done Bran, he's a pretty ineteresting character as is your premise for this fic.
Great job so far,
Acoustical Ferret
*fades*
clara200 chapter 3 . 1/5/2004
bran sounds kinda moody but I can see why.
Vane2 chapter 3 . 1/5/2004
Bran's how Tagg should have been...a bit evil, but with a conscience of sorts. Fun story to follow. Hope your computer is working better now. (And why did your author's note appear about four times on the end of chapter two?)
-Vane
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