Reviews for Black Amber
VortexWithAnEnd chapter 33 . 2/26
What a way to end it! This was fantastic though :)
SortingHat chapter 2 . 11/12/2015
Easy answer. Brainwashed. Another fanfic that was good explained that Dumbledore used an imperious curse to get Sirius Black to suddenly switch with Peter in order to allow the potters to be killed and hopefully Harry with it so Dumbledore could keep his position without being threatened.

Unfortunately for Dumbledore Harry survived so instead Bumblebee decided to use Harry as a WMD instead which to do that Harry needed to be weak and not able to think for himself. If Harry stayed with the Dursleys he would see Dumbledore as a *savior* to look up to and be steered to *approved* people that will further make him usable as a weapon knowing Harry would be ashamed of himself.

Hence the reasons he never went to check on Harry's welfare to make sure he is being treated decent not even once which no responsible headmaster would be that careless without some level of corruption involved.

Hagrid should not have Harry's *vault key* because it is his *trust* vault for being young.
Raven24601 chapter 33 . 12/7/2013
I must say I am extremely picky about the fanfiction I read but yours was amazing honestly the story was original and had action and romance I don't normally like harry and funny but in this fic it worked well. Well Done and keep writing no matter what people say you have at least one fan! Good luck in future stories x
lestrevas chapter 33 . 10/15/2013

My eyes were seriously watering up in the end...especially with Severus... oh, crap.. now im crying again!
thank you thank you thank you for writing this story!
Guest chapter 29 . 9/17/2013
while i love the story, you really need an english beta
Iwa Shinju chapter 33 . 7/3/2013
I've enjoyed it. You pulled of a somewhat human Voldemort surprisingly well.
Guest chapter 24 . 5/26/2013
Stop saying Maggie and Ian I have no idea who they are!
James018 chapter 33 . 10/19/2012
I enjoyed this story a lot. I've rarely seen Harry-is-Voldemort's-son fanfictions written like this so successfully. Well done.

I did notice you have trouble with some of your grammar. Am I correct in assuming English is not your first language? I recommend you get a beta reader in the future to check chapters over for you before you post them. It would make them much more readable.
Minato4Yellowflash chapter 33 . 7/6/2012
NICE! LOVED how it turned out! You know, the fact that voldemort was Harry's grandfather. NICE! I really loved the plot of this story. Seriously, I loved it, the draco caro and hary trio. I added you to my favorites list, see?
semantics chapter 33 . 1/15/2012
I'm so happy everything ties up in the end! There's so much I want to say... although, I love how everything centers around relationships - the whole story is supported by each and every characters' connections (6th degree of separation... hmm)

and Voldy being Harry's grandfather - I gasped! I am so proud to have picked up on the hints - like then man falling in darkness trying to remember blue eyes - I was like "Severus, definitely" and the red hair amber eyes girls I was like "is this voldemort talking?"

And Hermione and Draco getting together - I knew it from the point where Hermione was like "Grey eyes looking at me intensely" or something along those lines

Although I need to reread this hahaha to look for all the devices leading up to the end. Well written :D
Hortensia chapter 2 . 12/15/2011
Your story has been added to the community You Could be Great, You Know... This C2 contains stories where Harry is sorted in Slytherin.
Roz chapter 33 . 2/15/2011
This is a great story!

There are hardly any stories which are long, completed, interesting and really fun to read.

So thanks for writing it, i'm very impressed.
Memys chapter 33 . 7/11/2010
I really hope that harry became DARK! Such a pity that the Dark Lord end like that! Anyway, good story!
crimson hearts chapter 1 . 3/30/2010
well i am interested in how things will play out:D
Hocapontas chapter 33 . 2/15/2010
Totally awesome story! I hope you wrote a sequel. I'm going to check out your other stories now.
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