|Reviews for Someday|
| TakerTakeMe chapter 26 . 9/15/2005
This story was awesome! It was, quite possibly, even BETTER than "Drop To Zero" and I didn't think that was possible since "Drop To Zero" was so fantastic! You totally had me crying by chapter 11 with the whole butcher knife scene. All in all, this was a great story and I can't believe I'm only just discovering it now!
| TakerTakeMe chapter 1 . 9/15/2005
Awesome beginning! I didn't know you actually did a sequel to Drop To Zero and a sequel to this too! Gotta go, need to keep reading. ;-)
| Kay chapter 26 . 9/13/2004
Wow, what an amazing imagination that you have. I've enjoyed these two stories very much and am totally looking forward to the third. Thanks so much for sharing;-)
| DCFanatic4life chapter 26 . 9/11/2004
Such a nice end to the story. Even though there's that feeling of foreboding. I don't know why, but my feeling that something bad happening has to do with Shawn. I don't know how that's going to turn out, but I can't wait for the next story. :)
| KrystalBlaze - Jerikor chapter 26 . 9/11/2004
A new chapter! WHO!
Poor Shawn. I can feel his pain. I don't know how he's going to survive. If Stephanie and Chris head off by themselves and leave him alone . . . I don't know what would happen to him.
At least the kid's all well, and so are Stephanie and Chris.
I can't see what's going to happen in the next one, but man, you know I'll be here JB!
| stratusskittles316 chapter 25 . 8/24/2004
YESS! YESS! I will join you!
| Kay chapter 24 . 8/23/2004
Bravo! Bravo! I'm giving you a standing ovation as we speak. Of course, you scared the crap out of me with Stephanie losing her heartbeat! But of course, the payoff was SO worth it when the heart monitor went beep beep beep! You have a wonderfully vivid imagination and I thank you very much for sharing! What a ride it has been! Here's hoping you write more Smoochies in the future;-)
| Kay chapter 23 . 8/23/2004
First off, thanks for the bittersweet clue. It looks like Batista is helping but I'm not so sure about that. Then again, Hunter is back so all bets are off. Another excellent chapter;-)
| Kay chapter 22 . 8/23/2004
Man, you sure do know how to do the best cliffhangers ever! Of course, I want to know what Batista is up to and what's going to happen next! Of course, it's been a great story & I've enjoyed every spine tingling part of it;-)
| kandiland chapter 24 . 8/22/2004
That was a great ending i must say. you even had me doubting stephanie (but only for a second). i'm glad that they are "ok" so to speak and they got a happy ending. and they named the baby after batista, that's so cute. a very good choice indeed. can't wait to read more of you work.
| mystique619 chapter 24 . 8/22/2004
I actually can't remember if i've reviewed this yet. I'm shocking like that. But i loved this story and the first one as well, i'm not a fan of 24 (i could never really get into it) but i love the idea of showing a day in real time and you made a great transition into writing this story. I was a bit suprised by dave helping out but then of course in the end it all made sense. I have a feeling that dave letting randy go could cause yet another version of this story from you which of course i wouldn't be against. Again a great final chapter to a great story
| KrystalBlaze - Jerikor chapter 24 . 8/22/2004
JB, all I can say is . . . YOU LIVE FOR NOW!
Lol, no really. No, I'm serious. You think I'm not? You just wait. One more ounce of harm comes to his fine blonde head . . . you'll be needing to look over your shoulder a bit more, if you know what I mean . . . (evil stare)
That was awesome, JB. You packed emotion, intenseness, everything that should be in a story. You never lost sight of the human focus, and heck, my eyes were popping when I saw that they'd planned it all to the coin! Very wicked twist.
I hope your creative juices turn into a river soon, and I will be looking for you new stories soon. My new stories? Err . . . maybe less than soon. :)
(my own lame attempt at humor. :))
| stratusskittles316 chapter 24 . 8/22/2004
Its over! Yay! I was so happy that Batista was working on their side! I was FREAKING out when stephanie shot Chris, I was like hyperventalating! And then I was freaking out again cuz I thought she died! Wow, I can't tell you how much I loved this story! Your such a great writer and I cant wait to read more of your stories! Chao for now!
| KrystalBlaze - Jerikor chapter 23 . 8/22/2004
Man, girl, that was intense. I hadn't counted on Hunter reappearing. His speech at the end was beautifully bittersweet.
Stephanie and Shawn are out, Batista's turned, Hunter's back . . . how will it end?
| DCFanatic4life chapter 24 . 8/22/2004
Aww, it's kind of sad to see it all come to an end. I love that you made Dave a good guy, it was perfect. You had me surprised that this really was a set-up by Chris and Dave, I never would've suspected at all that it was a set-up. Then you had me thinking that Stephanie was on the other side for a second, talk about scary. Then you had Stephanie almost dying. I have to say you did a great job of keeping up suspense until the end, and you should be proud of that. The story was great and very suspenseful and full of cliffhangers that left you wanting more, so kudos to you. Thank you for your kind words, and thank you for writing such a great story. :)