Reviews for Haze
cha chapter 1 . 10/25/2015
if u want you dead in this fic. its fine for me but you should have at least created a build up or prolong the story. in this fic, it seems the fact that "yoh is dead" is very out of place. you have to put more why, how , when , where ,etc on this matter.
That could have been a nice twist but with no character or plot build-up it won't do your fic any good.
wamomo chapter 1 . 2/25/2012
this is just.

i can't. no words.

i just hate you a bit for writing such a fluff and then BAM

"bitch he's dead, lol u"

overall it's great. i really liked the sexy/confident yoh. 3
Guest chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
what the fuck? why the hell did you kill yoh? Seriously dude, change the ending, it ruins the whole fic!
chickenchickster chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
it was awsome but i didn't like the dying part
Ja 01'Loving you Always chapter 1 . 1/20/2009
Wow.. Huhu.. Somewhat a total drag of emotions.. Haha.. From total bliss to total plunge of despair.. Man, nut great fic none the less.. God bless and chows..
kattylin chapter 1 . 6/28/2008
you meanie! you killed yoh-sama! (sobs) i love the fic! omg it's awesome! omg (sob) i love it!
deletedforpersonalreasons chapter 1 . 3/21/2008
aw damn girl, now that last part just ruined it :( you're a good writer but please take note of us more sensitive readers who like happy endings! :D
Ruffy GEAR 2 chapter 1 . 4/29/2007
ok, great story . 10/10, but why must yph die?

nontheless: GREAT
Kanashimi Angel chapter 1 . 4/2/2007
OMG...OMFG! WHa...NO YOH DEAD! OMG...Poor Ice Queen...Now, if even the Ice Queen herself feels cold, then the room must be really cold! DEFINITELY ON FAVES! Oh that sudden urge to cry...
chenelyn chapter 1 . 11/21/2006
Its so... beautiful...*sniff*. Ive read a lot of yona's already, and i think this is one of my favorites... you killed yoh though... but its ok- REALLY nice story:)*bows down*you should write more of this stuff.
Waterfade chapter 1 . 11/11/2006
Oh gawd.. NO! You should really put a warning in the beginning of the story! And here I thought that the story was going to have happy ending.. It was a nice fic though.
Itako No Helena chapter 1 . 10/16/2006
Aw...EneriRenie,youre such baka!The end of fic...I almost cryed T_T..Anyway,its wonderfull!
Saruwatari Akimi chapter 1 . 8/12/2006
So wonderful...yet so sad! The end bit kind of puts me in mind of part of my fanfiction Hallucinations. *Sob sob* This is brilliant!
Jenituls chapter 1 . 4/23/2006
WAHH ! ! How sad! I thought it would end happily until I saw the *

Yoh .. DEAD ? NO ! ! ! T.T

Despite the sadness, this is a beautiful, superb fic.

going into favorites :)
Nightglider chapter 1 . 3/2/2006
this...honestly broke my heart...

Not many fics did that but this...

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