Reviews for In The Darkness
Aria Breuer chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
This is a nice, but dark poem. I saw no grammatical errors, which is good.

This poem reminds me of Frodo's perilous journey to Mordor. I can tell at this point, the corruption of the One Ring is starting to take hold of Frodo's mind. Either way, the words of the poem drew me in, allowing me to read it until the very end. (I rhymed again! - well, anyway...)

Good work.

-Aria Breuer
Morris the Fool chapter 1 . 11/5/2006
Rebecca of York chapter 1 . 6/14/2005
This is very good! I really loved it.
Grumpy Go-Lucky chapter 1 . 1/3/2004
Cool. I don't get some of the language though. I think it sounds a bit awkward because you chose hard words to rhyme with.