Reviews for No Turning Back
SYDNEY chapter 1 . 5/18/2011
i love chapter 5 but i love to see chapter 6 and chapter 7

and chapter 8 and chapter 9 and chapter 10 and chapter 11
goldenpuon chapter 5 . 12/12/2010
This story was very sad yet also well done.

It was a shame to see Marlin die. About how you said that this would closely follow, The Land Before Time, teh point where Marlin died reminded me a bit of Lion KIng.

I really liked Angel's intro. At first I thought she was Dory and she had gone crazy. lol
The Imaginative Light chapter 4 . 3/18/2009
*Gasps* DON'T DIE, MARLIN . . . I'm crushed now. Poor young Nemo.

shifufangirl95 chapter 5 . 1/11/2009
HA HA HA! that was too hysterical! marlin's death was sad, but this cheered me up!
Delilah chapter 5 . 9/10/2008
Aw...! Marlin's death was too sad. ;_; And what Gill said...oh dear. Angel was neat though. I liked how she slugged him. XD Lols
caseyo chapter 4 . 10/24/2007
I'm so excited for the rest! I can't waiting for the ending!

Caseyo chapter 5 . 10/15/2007
This is a good one. Keep writing!
dochar ar bith ann chapter 5 . 11/20/2006
Interesting, but just one question: Why does Gill stutter?
NXMAN chapter 5 . 10/24/2005
Aww man, The Story is just getting good. hope they'll find dory soon. and not DEAD. please update. thanks
ExtremeWriter chapter 5 . 4/21/2005
Oh, this is great! Keep Writing! Poor Nemo. And poor Dory. I hope she's okay, too.
Xioux Animal chapter 5 . 5/22/2004
Something I hope that will NOT happen:
They DO find Dory...DEAD!
Something I DO hope happens: They find her, alive, of course... :P
Update, PWEEASE?
Florida's Firefly chapter 4 . 1/25/2004
Guys, I am REALLY sorry it's so depressing, but I've written part of the ending ahead of time and I PROMISE you it's happy and will leave you feeling good! PLEASE DON'T RUN AWAY!
Mimori Kiryu chapter 5 . 1/24/2004
Hey, this is awesome! I loved the movie finding nemo and this story's cool. the only part I din't like was when you killed Marlin...darn. anyway, i hope Gill and Nemo find Dory. Update Soon!
ArcherofDarkness and Callie chapter 4 . 1/18/2004
I'm sorry, its too sad to read anymore, WAH!
Ainariel-Helyanwe chapter 5 . 1/18/2004
lol i like it! more more more! please
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