Wow. Very well written crossover. Great, serious look at the characters. I can picture it quite well, which is a feat when I mentally cross TV with Animated. Love the 'family
moment. I'd love to see your take on the scene when their Grandpa is told that Yami is literally half of Yugi's soul. Good for you, Grandpa! Go with the heart's response...reading on with anticipation.

What a fun story! I love how you write all of their relationships.

This is so fun. I love this clash of verses! I didn't think I would, but I do. Lol, Bakura's thieving, soul-stealing, blood thirsty ways are going to get Ryou into official trouble. He started getting wary once he realized he was just outside a room full of cops! Poor guy.
Mokuba did a great job playing at not knowing English. I was kinda confused for a while until you brought up him being a "kidnap risk" and then a lightbulb went off of why he would wait until he had Seto or someone else he trusted to look after him after being so close to a blast like that.

This is really special, awesome and original.

I have to admit i'm not much of a fan of Yu-Gi-Oh or The Sentinel(i'm more of a Scooby Doo fan, and some of the old school Hanna-Barbera cartoons, but I do appreciate a well written fan fiction like this one.

I also have a soft spot for fan fics set in Washington State(my home state as a matter of fact); keep up the good work writing as well.

I read the entire thing but half of it went over my head considering I've never seen The Sentinel. I did get the gist though so good job!

I love this story!

You are a master of cross over. I couldnt stop reading this. Please please tell me at some point youd consider writing where yugi finds out about his relation with Blair

I really love your yugioh crossovers. There is so much going on in the story, and you manage to make it interesting and exciting without it being overwhelming. I love how you develop all the characters, thank you for posting!

you ever going to write a sequel?

It's sad that you never finished this, because it really isn't finished. Yugi never found out about Blair and Blair and Jim never found out what Yami and Bakura really are. I wonder if there's a chance you'll ever make a sequel. It's been ages since the last time you touched the Yugioh fandom at all...

Your crossovers are a thing of joy and beauty forever. I never knew I needed this in my life but I /really did/ even if its been sitting here for 10 years wthout me knowing about it.
Thanks for writing this!

Well, I'm not familiar with sentinel, but I still really enjoyed this.

wow this was really well written i liked it a lot

*round of applause*