|Reviews for The Worries of Boromir|
| FearOfDeathIsIllogical chapter 1 . 3/22/2013
| Aurora West chapter 1 . 1/26/2004
La la la la. Break out the ale! These men are thirsty! HA HA HA HA!
| Little Miss AJ chapter 1 . 1/3/2004
Overall I'd say this is a good story. It has a nice theme, everyone seems to be in character and you raise some interesting themes (e.g. Did Boromir always want to be a warrior? The constant comparison between Faramir and Boromir in the eyes of their father). There are no spelling innacuracies with names, etc. And the grammar is fine, so that's all groovy.
But now, I'm going to recommend one or two things to make it better. First of all, things like bold aren't turning up in your story and are coming up as symbols. Before you create your story, always look at the preview to see if you're entirely happy and to check for these errors.
Second, try not to make the language too archaic because I noticed some muddled senteces.
And third, state which time it's set in and how old the characters are.
Other than that, I really like like this story and I'll be looking out for it. I'm a big Boromir fan and it's nice to see thoughtful little stories such as these ones. Please keep writing.