|Reviews for My Last Breath|
| Missing a Member chapter 3 . 11/17/2005
great job! the whole 'god' thing i dont agree with (cuz im too religious to), but i loved it anyway.
| Swizz chapter 3 . 6/14/2005
Nice idea, but this is insulting to Christians and a bit out of character. -folds arms- Next time you write something like this, put something to the effect of: 'This may offend Christians.' Somewhere.
| Draconis Lupi chapter 3 . 3/19/2005
okay... that was kinda random...
| Dejaevu chapter 2 . 3/16/2005
um...huh? this all made sense and was pretty good until that last part...
| jessistentialism chapter 3 . 2/24/2005
Thiz ztory roxmysox. Please, please, continue. I must know what happens! I cannot wait any longer! Plz continue soon. I am alos a big BB/R believer and I just can't wait!
my bb/r shrine
join if ya want _
love your fan
| Musicgirl92 chapter 3 . 2/4/2005
Great story! Please update soon!
| Rakhec III chapter 1 . 10/28/2004
Yo, I don' like Cyborg that much, but with Raven seriously injured an' all, that " Wooks wike wittle Beast Boy's got a girlwiend" or wuteva u wrote is like, totally NOT Cyborg (an' totally uncalled for.) Just a suggestion. Other'n that, pretty good fic, keep up the good work. (Damn, this looks long!)
| ravendarkraven chapter 3 . 9/21/2004
ooh, ooh! Write more please!
I'd kill for being able to write love stories, and this is so cute! i'm a Goth and even i think it's cute, so you've got to be doing something right!
see you all in hell,
| SARA chapter 2 . 9/5/2004
THAT WAS PERFECTLY SAD THAT SUCKS SHE DIDDN'T GET TO TELL HIM WHAT SHE WAS ABOUT TO SAY
| SARA chapter 1 . 9/5/2004
THAT WAS CRAFTY I LIKE IT
| SARA chapter 3 . 9/3/2004
I WOULD ASK WHAT ALL THAT WAS ABOUT BUT I ALREADY ANSWERED IT MYSELF HEY IF YOU WANT TO RETURN ANY E-MAILS OR SOMETHING HERE IS MY ADRESS :
FOR SOME REASON I CAN'T PUT IT UP IN THE E-MAIL ADRESS THINGY WELL HOPE TO HEAR FROM YOU SOON
| Lady Shelina chapter 3 . 8/19/2004
omg... great story! raven and bb forever!
| SpiderSquirrel chapter 3 . 6/14/2004
ok... did someone have fun at ccd?
| Evilbakuragirl chapter 3 . 5/15/2004
PLEASE ADD MORE!
| nyaanyaanyaa chapter 3 . 3/26/2004
THIS IS SO SAD...