|Reviews for Remnants|
| Jane Kelly chapter 19 . 2/11
Bastila? I totally didn't see that coming.
| w.s.caer chapter 28 . 1/4/2016
This was a very poignant ending, which I normally love but it just hurt too much this time around, I think, knowing he's carrying all those memories of them. You write Carth very well. Just the wring balance of wry humour, flirt, and loss.
| vweaver13 chapter 22 . 7/19/2014
Loving the story thus far, but I wanted to let you know that you originally called Revan 'Jaylen' in previous chapters/works. In this chapter (and the last) you've been calling her Jaia, which was the name of the First Officer on Carth's ship. Sorry to quibble!
| machievelli chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
To be posted 23 Apr 2010 on StarwarsKnights under The Critic returns and Lucasforums under the Critic’s Two Cents.
I do not have time to read and review a full length novel, so I read the first three sections, and reviewed them. The scenes are well laid out, but feel artificial, like knowing that bulkhead is really a sheet of plastic attached to two by fours. It didn’t feel quite right. You did have some homonym problems, such as it is you make do, not due. Every fault I see with the work is a matter of editing.
Technical: Aboard ships you do not use the descriptions you would on land. Check out the article I wrote; [ ?t200318] Ship nomenclature, or; It's not a door, it's a hatch blast it! [/url] over at Lucasforums, and you’ll see what I mean.
All in all a good read, I am still at the calm before the storm point, but worth a look.
| The Lady Meow chapter 1 . 10/2/2009
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| blackhawk68 chapter 5 . 5/29/2009
ANYWAY. Great story so far. I look forward to reading the rest of it.
Ha, Serenity/Firefly reference! Lol. Jayne is alot like Canderous.
Man, I love Serenity and Firefly. I can imagine that not that many people get that though.
| Shayneutrality chapter 2 . 6/3/2008
very interesting start to the story. (:
i loved your descriptions, especially in the prologue, and the description of the men at the bar XD
| Taeniaea chapter 29 . 6/1/2008
| Ayama15 chapter 6 . 2/21/2008
I stumbled across your story when I was browsing this morning, and I have to say, it's one of the best KOTOR fan fics I've read, hands down. I love the way you melded Firefly with KOTOR. It's a perfect fit, and I can't believe I didn't notice how much the characters resembled each other before. Great work, and I can't wait to read more!
| spedclass chapter 2 . 9/9/2007
Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!
| spedclass chapter 1 . 9/9/2007
Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!
| StormTorrent chapter 29 . 8/8/2007
OH MY GOODNESS! I loved the ending.
That was beautiful. The lyrics go absolutely perfectly. I'm inclined to read your other stories now too. Gracious-I need to play KOTOR II. My friend told me it was such a depressing game though...and besides, Carth isn't in it. *sniffle* I love Carth. He was like...the sole reason I was playing KOTOR until I found out I was Revan. ROTF!
Props for an amazing read. Took me only a few hours though-you could make your chapters longer. But your descriptions are eloquent and precise if not always verbose. Love it. :) I've been hoping to write a Revan/Carth one shot...so maybe I'll try my hand at it. I could never outdo you with a sequel anything like this.
I think it's really funny what you named your Revan figure. Jaia Sin. My Revan figure was named Juriah. (dunno what her last name is...*shrug*) I found it easy to read since I was so accustomed to my name, and yours was quite similar to it. *heh* Very nice. LOL!
| StormTorrent chapter 19 . 8/8/2007
Fricking Bastila always has to go and do something stupid doesn't she! Oh my gracious, I should have killed her at the Star Forge...*shakes head in shame* One of these days, she'll have to stop having these ridiculous moodswings of hers.
Kick her out of the Temple! *boos Bastila*
Still lovin' the story. :)
| StormTorrent chapter 17 . 8/8/2007
Wow. I got REALLY scared there for a second that this was going to veer off into some random OC fic. Thank God it didn't. This is fantastic.
I can't help but see Revan as the girl I played in my game (I played the black haired asian chick, whoot-whoot!), however-you still handle her personality in a way that is universal and I'm sure appealing to the several people who have played through KOTOR as a girl. Her personality is real and raw, and I'm so glad that you captured that! As for Carth-he's only my favorite character in the whole game, and you have got him down pat. I knew he'd never betray Revan that easily. Can't wait to read more! :) Thanks!
| Yatty chapter 29 . 12/14/2005
Excellent story, but... damn I hate those kind of endings. It tears me up when they lose a part of themselves, or their memories. Far more than when those same characters die.
In summary, I'm hoping the Sith win the next war. Delightfully bittersweet; a wonderful read.