Wow. The Trash get good reviews. It's like Twilight and it's Gay as shit (fairy) vampires with Identity Disorders. Ahahahhaa trash only like trash.

Fun. I think you did very well with Jayne's voice.

LOL-beautiful.

perfect in every way

Liked it! Hope you keep writing!

Wow...just yeah..wow. That was extraordinarly Jayne-like. I'm very impressed and there were a few lines in there that just made me laugh. Great oneshot!

i like that. i aint never read a fic with that concept so its a nice original one. shiny!

Great Jayne voice, could hear him muttering away to himself in my head. Loved it. Hope you write more Firefly and more Jayne!

Very Jayne-like. I am impressed.

"when Kaylee ain't happy, ain't nobody happy"

Ain't that right.

Good fanfic, I think you really captured him. The way he talks, and all. Personaly, I'm a Jayne/River shipper, so I don't find the odds to bad, but I could see how Jayne could, for now.

very good Jayne voice. Kept to his identity, right and good. Rather amusing too. THough i'm starting to see the apeal of Jayne, asshole that he is, in love with Kaylee.

an extremely laughable story. In fact, let me take a moment here to laugh.

There. Much better.
Good! v. v. good!
Ellen

*snort* snicker *guffaw*
Oh, that was SO Jayne.
Do some more!

Oh this as great, I'd say you've got a really good grasp of the characters here. So funny. I can hear him talking as I read it.

I can say with confidence that you have a good grasp of Jayne's character! I could hear him muttering to himself...
Most enjoyable.
Pen

Heh heh. I have no idea what Firefly is, I've never seen/read it, but hey, this was funny and very... you. Yay!
As always,
Nisha/Me