I'm guessing HBP didn't exist in 2004... Reading this for the first time 18 years later is a weird yet interesting experience.

Just finished reading both this and its sequel. Definitely one of my favourite fanfictions! Thank you so much for writing this amazing story. I love how Harry interacts with the weasleys!

How did no muggles stop to see Harry yelling at Percy? Lol.

Again, First Years can’t try out. It was in the first book.

First Years can’t try out for the quidditch team. There was a special exception for Harry. So that part is wrong. Who was Mark Evans? Poor Harry.

Why does Ginny think Umbridge tipped off the Death Eaters? Malfoy is the more likely one to do that. But damn. I’m surprised Diagon Alley didn’t have many people in it. And poor Hestia Jones. :)

So is it only Harry who refers to Remus as Moony in the description? It’s kinda confusing. Moony is his nickname. When he’s being talked about anywhere, he should be Remus or Lupin. So did Harry give the Weasley’s Grimmauld Place or something?

If Harry had failed History of Magic, he’d have a grade instead of just N/A. He’d have T for Troll. Just saying. Also, it’s McGonagall, not McGongale.

I think Harry’s dreams should be in it,six’s. It harder to read when they aren’t. Also, Remus shouldn’t be described as Moony, but as Remus or Lupin. But when someone is taking to him, they use the name Moony if that makes sense.

Do they know about the prophecy? I hope Snape becomes better.

How did the Dursely’s not wake up to Fred and George?

A patronus harry? Really?

Its McGonagall not McGonagle

amazing!11

I know it’s late but the right name is McGonagall.