|Reviews for Not All At Once|
| Kittenmommy chapter 1 . 5/13/2012
Wow. This is dark and disturbing and oh so very plausible. Bravo!
| RebeccaRoy chapter 1 . 4/29/2008
Never saw that coming, loved it though.
| FantasyIslander65 chapter 1 . 9/21/2006
Ouch. That's a very different take on Khan's feelings for Marla. Have you read "To Reign in Hell: The Exile of Khan Noonien Singh"? I thought that filled everything in perfectly. And yet...as I sat reading this, I could all too easily hear Ricardo Montalbán's voice in the role, delivering Khan's black thoughts as you wrote them here. Very nice work.
| Princess Artemis chapter 1 . 3/21/2004
Perhaps bad of me that I didn't read the other fic first, but...o. Chills. Khan's voice is captured perfectly.
| mimi6 chapter 1 . 1/5/2004
another excellent story. keep up the good work.