Reviews for The Diary
lee chapter 1 . 5/15/2004
Love is so awful although I don't think she's quite that bad in the show.I like the story but you should chaeck your spellings more carefully.
Lapin de la Flouve chapter 1 . 1/8/2004
HEHEHE I love it. Perfect! halarious. write another one please.
Jeanee chapter 1 . 1/6/2004
Whoa Tear, applause applause! Way to go! I agree with the other reviewer, you're definitely improving in critical areas, and the flow of this short story was really even.
Keep your pen to paper - or your fingers to the keyboard, lol, and I look forward to your continued writing projects!
Jackson384 chapter 1 . 1/5/2004
Aw that was so sweet. Very nice and I think your capitalization and pundtuation is starting to improve. Keep it up!
Belle Walker chapter 1 . 1/5/2004
Oh my god! I'm laughing so hard I have tears in my eyes!
What a fabulous ficlet. Heather is just so mean. Shame on her for reading Lily's diary!