Reviews for My Last Breath
JazzAngel7 chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
GREAT STORY!

Made me tear up a little bit!
BakerStreetIsLastRefugeOfHope chapter 1 . 2/19/2009
A great story. Very good.
Wills Lover chapter 1 . 2/28/2008
There is a little more say goodnigh holding my last breath safe inside myself sweet raptured light

It ends here tonight

that is the bit that is missing
Cinnamint Kitty chapter 1 . 5/30/2007
i loved it! it was almost like a love story mixed in with some super natural stuff! great job!
SparklingDiamond chapter 1 . 5/6/2007
WOW! That was really sad :,) I luv it!
XxNovellaxX chapter 1 . 7/15/2006
That was really really good.
Golden-Flute chapter 1 . 6/8/2005
It was good. Very sad, but it also seemed that everything went by quickly. You didn't mention Barbossa's downfall... the mutiny of it or anything. You just said something like 'Will broke the curse. He ran for Elizabeth' and it just seemed like 'Oh, okay... well... that's nice.' This is not a flame, only a friendly criticism.

Legolas-gurl88
Mrs.Turner chapter 1 . 5/3/2005
Aw how sad!:(

It made me cry!
Smithy chapter 1 . 12/18/2004
Sad, but a great soul-mates story, that love is more than just a human thing, that if you love someone, deeply, it goes beyond mortality
Catmint chapter 1 . 8/12/2004
WOW. This is a real tearjerker. *sniffle* It's so sad. You've done a fantastic job.
williz chapter 1 . 7/27/2004
That's so sad. It brought a tear to my eye. Atleast they got to be together in the end. That was a really nice story. Great job again!
GiGgLyGaL chapter 1 . 7/19/2004
that was sad, but beautiful. Good job.

Giggly
Corgidog88 chapter 1 . 7/13/2004
this is good, but sad.
Jodie1 chapter 1 . 6/19/2004
In a word: WAH!

You actully made me cry!

I loved it!
Capasso-007 chapter 1 . 3/20/2004
Aw... that was so sweet... I'm glad you let her take him home.
I almost cried. Ohh...
Great job!
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